good start author, the MC looks amazing, especially his powers, but the best thing I liked about your work is the detailing of scenes which hooked me up. I highly recommend this book especially to those who like dark fantasy settings.
"Okay, let's go desu."
"MOM" a girl runs up to me and hugs me "your finally here omg I missed you"
Edward this time smiled at her lack of shame at placing the guilt of the attention she had just received.
"What happened?"
"Yes… Is it wrong of me?" Millicas asked of Alexander. "Is it wrong that I want them punished for how they hurt Mom and you, but at the same time, I don`t want to lose them and feel sad for all this happening? It has to be bad, because if I feel sad for them, then I must be doing a bad thing to you and Mom and…" Millicas was starting to go into a rambling mode, before Alex kneeled before him and put a hand on his shoulder.
"hahahahah"
"Boss? You mean this is MR. ZAYED?" ( mini)
Meanwhile, Lin Guiying also didn't understand what her classmates were planning at first. However, when she saw them looking at Zhou Lei, she immediately knew that it had something to do with him.
"Tentu saja, kamu dipersilahkan untuk kembali ke Lembah Sungai Putih sebagai tamu."
You're bundled up now, wait till you get older
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid