I'd say that the pacing is too slow and everything is very unnecessarily detailed. But as it is a fantasy novel it's a good trait. I would say I would like to give the novel a chance and see how the story goes.
I really love the story, especially the characters. The drawing is so cool and detailed, more chapters author.
All I can is; this book is interesting! I love the fact that it is a clear shift from the typical damsel in distress story where the FL is weak and needs a ML to help her always. The opposite isn't even the case here, the ML is an Omega yet he is so determined to be a person of his own despite hurdles coming his way. I am so eager to see his growth. I love this book, author. A great job you are doing here. ?
I feel uncomfortable at chapter 192 ..... the mc is still going even his partner pass out ...and he still show that to his sister ...poor sister
"Ok sucker, bye." I quickly flay to school.
"Remember leave and dont come back."
With a little nervous Jester gave a few potion of kindness. "Alright, my Lord this is the bottle."
Never! Never!
And a little more every day
After the system finally said its last words, a weird silence comes down upon the room. As Uquan had been busy the whole time he really didn't feel anything the entire time, maybe because of adrenaline, but now that he has gotten a momentary pause of silence he stars to feel tired. He looks back at his situation and realizes how ridiculous it is and how weirdly easy it seemed for him to accept everything, even the concept of killing. Slowly getting more and more tired, his eyes start to feel heavy and thinking to himself that he has faced more than enough today, he decides to go to his newly acquired bed and before he could even lift up the blankets he falls asleep on his pillow.
"I'm Charles sir, Charles Yang." Charles said as he released Mr. Mohamed's hand.
" I know that you like being here in this world because you can touch everything and everyone but maybe I look selfish, I only want you to hold, hug and kiss me... just me alone. " I said as I made his chest as a pillow and listen to the beat of his heart.