The novel is good, I'm following it in Spanish since it's more advanced.
Since I am the one who created this book I should probably congratulate myself if someone chooses not toWell aside from that this series is my second work and in all truth it is the one I really have faith inHere are the things to expect from this story1. You will definitely not see a good and kind mc here. He might even be like fang yuan or even worse since I am a Faithful follower in the ways of fang yuan so people who loves good mc this will definitely not be your cup of tea2. Do not expect an op mc from this show. He will not be really strong but he will also not be really weak. Although he might be really strong in the eyes of humans in the future of this novel3. This mc will suffer alot. The mc will go through unimaginable pain to achieve his dream. And maybe at a certain point he might go insane4. The novel will have romance in it but do not expect it to be all flowers and roses as it could end at any given moment.5. Do not try to do the things which our mc will do in this novel as if u do then u will be considered by society the devil himselfWell then I just wanted to tell readers of this novel this things so If you know you do nor like bad mc's NEVER READ THIS!!! Well I hope to see you all in the future❤️❤️❤️❤️
my selfish review is as follows: i really wish there were more chapters available to binge, because the story became really hard to put down after awhile ?.. in all honesty i would have given this novel five stars if there were bulk chapters as the story is worth supporting ?? great job author ???
Great at start but very less chapter later. Also it felt like I'm reading an AI made novel.
This is a fantastic fantasy novel, with intricate design of system! It's really fast pace, thrilling, and most of all, gripping FUN!The writing is also fire too. Smooth flow and seamless description. Please check this out! The author is really crafting this with extreme dedication!
A selfish review from the author here. First time writing a webnovel, please do let me know what you think of the book ?
A great start to a fantasy story. it is clear the author puts a lot of effort in world building and the writing is good. the novel can be improved with more conversations and interactions between characters than descriptions. Good luck on the new book.
great world background, altough the writing style is too bulked up, but hey its still ch 5, it still can be improved !the pacing isnt the best, but we still have a long way to go
There is no nice way to put this: This writer is barely literate. They have no idea how to write a complete sentence, let alone a complete thought. It was nigh impossible to understand just the first paragraph of the story. Please, people, I beg of you: You do not have to "publish" your story just because you wrote it. Learn how to write first. Keep writing and keep reading--really, I'm encouraging you to keep it up--but you can't honestly expect people to enjoy your story if you write at the level of a 3rd grader.
Since I am the first reader, I think the beginning is not bad.The world-building seems interesting.We haven't seen much of the characters yet, but Aletheia's interaction with the protagonist is a bit mysterious.Alright, I'd like to know when the release date is.And keep going~~
Ask me anything about this book, i will answer it. but no spoiler. comment as much as you like.
?I like the concept of dual cultivation, and how strong Xiao Feng is. The writing quality is relatively good, and not something you expect from a first timer?My problem lies with how short the chapters are, and the subtitle that appear during chapters, it ruins the spoiler factor, idk, maybe it's me.