Want a novel with top tier character interaction and story? well this little gem right here is just for you. I was hooked from the first chapter, especially by Arella's personality. it's a good read, I promise.. 10/10oh and if you're about to read this, be sure you have nothing else to do cuz once you start, you'll never want to stop...
It's a great novel; I absolutely recommend reading this one. Please continue daily updates.
I'm just here for the free fp from review
I like how it starts, and the way it unfolds so far is really good. I hope it continues at this pace. I'm excited to see Kodach's growth.
updated pls I e already read all the chapter it so good story update update update ?❤️❤️❤️
Story okay okay. Not superb like reincarnated with strongest system. Is there harem plot in this? Oh sorry it’s female one. Maybe male harem ? so any romance plots?
A good story with a very interesting world to explore and an engaging plot that keeps you hooked. Without a doubt a story that will be wonderful to follow.
i like the story but mc forgive celes so easily he had to keep her away at least because she don't believe in him when mc near his second execution I don't like her as heroine
I love the character dialogue and I'm excited to see how the story is developing. Everything fits within the setting and you can tell that it's very well thought out. There needs to be more romance ...:p
Solid writing quality. MC is overall tolerable and does not act too irrational. My 2 biggest issues are: 1) Motivation. The MC does not have any actual motivation to get strong. He does not even have any goals, making his journey feel empty. 2) Zero social relationships. MC does not have any meaningful connection with anyone. He doesn‘t care about anyone and nobody cares about him.
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
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