Overall, I find the concept of thisnatory fascinating. The siblings obviously care for each other very much, which already makes me like the book. The massive scale at the very beginning is overwhelming, which is kind of the point. The characters emotions are genuine and the author uses very descriptive language. Chapters are long, which is good for those wanting a meaty read. Good job, Author!
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Ayee sir I have been waiting for ittt!!!! OP NOVEL WITH OP AUTHOR XD. Good job. So proud of your work. Don't stop updating, sir hehehehe.
I love the quality of this novel. It's exactly the type of novel I'm looking to read in my spare time. This novel features an OP MC, a direct progression of the story, and a clear power system. The author's style and pace in his chapters are comforting to read and you can clearly feel that a clear effort of world-building is established in the story, so props for the author for that.
My concern through the progression of the story (without spoiling anything) comes with the characters themselves. The MC does not have any philosophy for himself, or in other words, he is the type of every generic cliches that act like the MC empathizes with the weak and is clearly a beta male then in the next chapters the same MC becomes arrogant and thinks every single species are just ants to him. The same could be said to some characters in the story too.
All in all, I'd strongly recommend this to readers who want to have a quick read. In the end, face-slapping novels are still satisfying to read.
Alright... The first chapter caught me off guard with a full explanation of ranks and leveling system. However, it's helpful as well since I can just go back in the first chapter to recall what rank it is on the ladder. Anyway, beast souls or concepts related to people using the powers of the beasts always remind me of Heavenly Jewel Exchange. It's a good read.Please continue writing more.
:the only thing i hate about it is that concept that he needs to become super duper gigantic to become strong, like all the super powerful people in this novel like galactic organism or what ever the author calls it has a body so big it sounds stupid. literally bigger is better concept. if he author could have made a different kind of concept for the combat body and not just make it increase in,size to become stronger then the novel could have been so,good... anyway, i am dropping this coz i think its already impossible for author to change the cultivation method after making it like this
okaayy. . umm... this is my review until chapter 360 its really similar with another novel with the same concept. From the situation and story development, the different is only the name and how long he endure the humiliation. .??
I READ AS MUCH OF THIS BOOK AS IT WOULD ALLOW ME AND IT SUCKED SO BAD THAT ITS A WASTE OF TIME!!
Obligatory "shameless 5-star".My synopsis doesn't say a lot, so I thought that if there are any questions in need of answers, just put them here, and I will, well.. answer them.
The characters were well-developed and relatable, and the plot was both thought-provoking and emotionally charged. I found myself completely immersed in the story, and I couldn't help but feel a sense of connection to the characters and their struggles
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on.The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.