Nice developing of the characters. I just love the way you build up images along with engaging dialogues. Half- elf that's quite new to me. Don't wanna spoil anymore. Just read it.
Can you Mass Release? There is an event going on. It may have some benefits for authors.
Fabulous world building and lore. Nice character outline. Good plot pacing with quality.The Updates are good considering the quality.I feel like Cultivation System is diverse and the writer has a long vision for it.
I think the writer is actually good. Just need to relax as you are writing, cos of the errors. I like how the story is going who would have guess a record player could do that(that's why it is fictional).I will love to know who murdered that Jane.
*Heart of a Prince* is a delightful read! ? The blend of romance and royalty keeps you hooked, with relatable characters and surprising twists. ?✨ A heartwarming story that’s perfect for fans of feel-good tales! ?❤️
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Unique. I was looking for such novels. Great job till nice
I started reading this book today and so far it's???
Si kinda comprehensive I’ll list the good and the bad for readers to decide on at their discretion.The good:Interesting storyNot boringVery readableCliche in a good wayGood power systemCreative enough magic/ auraThe badMC is a little bitch (like on god dude was how old when he transmigrated? But he acts like a little girl)Says it’s a harem but MC runs away from bitches like hes gayMC acts like a virgin in every situation but one. Which is weird given the character design. MC is like the equivalent of Brad Pitt or some shit before he transmigrates, so him acting like a little virgin doesn’t make a lot of senseMC whines a lotLots of redundant annoying internal dialog due to lack to decent characters TLDR: good enough to make you want to read it. MC is shitty enough to make you wanna drop it. One of those novels, which is unfortunately the most disappointing I feel
Authors and readers that enjoy obvious r*pe novels should be put on a list. This is disgusting trash
Well, what can I say. This is an absolute gem, I came here expecting silver but instead got diamond. A diamond in the rough.The English is well written and there are almost zero errors (atleast to where I have read), the characters are well portrayed, the explanations are vivid enough that you can directly envision them in your mind. For now, there is only six chapters and these six are absolutely awesome.Keep the good work going author and I wish your writing quality remains not only remains thesame, but also improves.
Overall a good start, the author certainly has talent. However the development would benefit from some adjustments. Sometimes following between the chapters is a bit difficult. This is something that can certainly be improved. Apart from that it is interesting. I think that this story has great potential.