Usually,I am not a fan of system novels, but this book has sparked my curiosity and I ended up reading. It was totally worth it!!! The plot itself appears promising and the characters are well written. The story develops through the main protagonist, Zach.. Instead dumping every information all at once.The story literally gives light to the journey of Zack to an orphan through a great warrior. Author have a pretty good command over the language and explains the story in simple terms, (which I haven't seen on other system novels) Kudos to the author, keep up the good work ???
i just want start that i have no idea about stability of updates(i just idk)and the writing quality is ok so {three star} for both of them, also i am just at chapter 33 so idk what happens at ex:page 114 or something happens idk what it is,i am just at page 33.let's start with world background,as far chapter 33, world building is justsecond coming of gluttony but watered down,it fantasy world with levels, that it really it and the levels do not made a difference,MC just one to two shot everything so why? have it at all? to be honest with you. i thought the world would be like idk a woods with fog and it night time all around at the start, and when the MC show to a town it just reveals to generic fantasy,what if? instead of fantasy it dark fantasy with horror, like the town is silent hill but in a fantasy setting and everyone is off,for word background {two star} for being second coming of gluttony butless interesting thing in the worldfar as story goes,MC get op almost at the start,then kill everything and get all the women in 30 feet radius of him,that it, very early on the MC get out as a demon two times but nothing happens,MC just run out town,no one comes get him,no wanted posters,nothing happens with it,might as well not have happened in the first,which is a problem that comes up over and over again,the MC can do the worst thing possible and nothing bad will ever come to him at all.{one star}character are just a mess,every one but MC and his women he simp toare just forgettable and bland,so to is the MC, but the MC is well the MCso you can some what remember him a little bit( i say that but i forgot his name lol )if you cut 60 to 70% of the character,the story well mostlystay the same,most character are just there to die,that it.for the MC idk what his deal is, he just kill anything, that not personality, that a hobby,he and female lead hate each other very much but for no reason at all?!?! that do 180 and love each other?!?!?!(one star) WQ:3SOU:3SD:1CD:1WB:2the total score is 2.0 but maybe a 2.3 or2.4
This novel is a grammatical abomination.
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Amazing book the story writing is awesome and the whole plot is very good and the perfect I had a worried I prefer you to read new writer is on the way he might be the best
This novel is the same as mc in most of the novels. He is stupid, naive, he does not like to kill for profit, mc does not use his brain and does not think ahead, mc has good intentions like the MCs in the other novel. His mentality sends himself to death. If mc was evil mc, this novel would be read.
Typical Japnese shy boy that have me questioning if he's actually gay. If you are into anime manga with high-school drama, cliché stuff about aggressive girl courting shy main boy then this is for you, I just grown out of this phase, it now becomes predictable and boring. No hate on the author, their writing quality is pretty good, just the genre that gutted my review.
I REALLY LOVE SYSTEM GENRES BUT ROMANCE NOT SO MUCH BUT THIS NOVEL REALLY HOOKED ME UP, EVERYTHING HAVE READ SO FAR SO FAR IS OF GOOD QUALITY , CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. GOOD JOB AUTHOR
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This review is a part of swap.I like this story, but it's quite confusing at first, how could an AI be a god? What about those people who didn't play the game? surely not everyone could play such a game. I have alot of questions and I hope we get an answer as the story goes. Overall the story is good and recommended, it has lots of room for improvement.
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A lovely write up, great story line. Every page keeps you glued. Work on quick delivery. I will gladly give this piece a 5 star for the wonderful work of Mastery. Looking forward to other works from this author. Great delivery. Thank you very much