the story seems interesting, and it has a lot of potential. except some minor 6, it will turn out great in the long time.
This book draws you in. I like it!! Must read more
As of chapter 2 I find the book very much fits my taste, I only hope that it continues that way. Aside from that, I encourage you all to read it as well
Avaria is the most amazing character in the novel and I like his attitude, the story starts with a boy who is very innocent and nice but after he shows his power he becomes better than expected. power curse symbol
This is my first time seriously reading a webnovel and trying to give critique about it.So far I would say the story is decent, it isn't the greatest ever but it is definitely enjoyable and keeps you wanting to read. There aren't to many chapters yet to give a detailed review but as of now, it definitely has potential to become good if everything gets fleshed out enough.This Webnovel also reminds me a lot of "Savior of Divine Blood" where in that world, people randomly get doors assigned to them in 3 different ranks, bronze, silver and gold. I just thought it's kinda similar with the concept of these doors appearing for people randomly and having a trial for them to complete.Keep up the good work!
I loved how relatable the characters were. They felt real, with flaws and struggles that mirrored real-life challenges. The protagonist's journey was inspiring and left me reflecting on my own life.
the radiations caused the ether to misform. Though it was an absurd conclusion in
"Yeah, not surspising, its kinda hard tough."
"H I T L E R."
"Look here, old sport, you've got to get somebody for me. You've got to try hard. I can't go through this alone."
They were so loud that there voice could be heard upstair and Zakira who was sleeping woke up because of them. Since she was on the edge she felt down because of them.
I made a silent o as the fall maiden continued