Amazing start author..
I read up to chapter 200 and dropped. For anyone reading this, expect a lot of plot holes and inconsistencies. For example, the protagonist is an orfan( since i think it was 5) who lived in a cruel world where the strong prey on the weak, and he managed, somehow, survive to late teens when he enrolls in an academy. You might expect him to be someone more careful, decisive, who values the things and opportunities he got and THINKS BEFORE HE ACTS, but you would be wrong. He is as much of a young master as the actual young masters of the stories, with the only 3 differences being his lack of etiquite, his"moral" standing and a money obsessed personality. There are times when the plot armor is so obvious and thick that i wonder why didnt the author just straight up write "plot armor here". The only decent things are fights descriptions and the writing. The story is just an amalgamation of every possible cultivation novel cliche you can think of.
Go read soul of negary, it's one of those non-harem stuff.
Is the cover art person 5? Lmao
Are all disciples women? Need to know if men will also be included.
Edit:
Nevermind, I took a peek at one of the latest and it said 2nd and 3rd are males.
Yay, it not one of those that only took girls that will fall inlove to their master.
So... I hope this doesn't contain romance
Its the end guys ?, nice story props to the author and translator ❤
Translation quality - is ok and perfectly readable
Stability of updates - is great, didnt even notice that it had 200chapters already and also good rate of releases
Story Development - was kinda iffy the first few chapters but later on it gets interesting, dont let the synopsis fool you into thinking that this is some type of girl harem story.... nope, if you came expecting sexual content, nope as of the chapter im at there are none.
Character Design - first i thought the mc was too stupid as a 5 year old kid even figured out some things before she did but i sticked through and found there are more behind the mc and also other characters, yes some get treated as nothing and get killed later on but there are characters that actually have good story development, just dont expect it in early chapters.
World background - while it is set on good old earth that experienced an Apocalypse, there are things that the author seems to keep forgetting, like evolving zombies and such and power mechanics and such and power levels and such...which frankly is a turn off.
so yeah it had things that will turn readers away from the get go, things like reverse rape and such, thinking that sexual content is the whole premise of the story but its not, heck no, mc gets naked a couple of times but really at the current chapter mc has just healed his deformed face, finally healed her boobs and not get mistaken as a man, also grew a thin membrane to cover up her hollow stomach and lastly turned bald and now wears a cap and sunglasses, yup nothing sexual, except if youre into that.....theres nothing wrong about that, you do you, before that the mc had like missing chunks of flesh with her innards dropping out, her boobs where eaten early on and also her face was deformed and her hair got burned when she got hit by thunder... so yeah
early chapters gets me irritated as i keep thinking about how stupid mc is, but read something a character in the novel said that made me change my mind, mc got reincarnated in a ruined world not knowing what happened to her original self within the past 5 years and also doesnt know what happened to her family members, all she had to rely on was the memory of a slutty ***** that relied on her body to breeze through the apocalypse without even encountering the stronger beings in it and also has no super powers so she also had no idea of the power system..
people say the characters early on are one dimensional, and its not, the mc is in a hurry to find her family and get some sort of idea the things happening around her and also people keep getting killed, but later on it shows the reason behind the things those characters do and also discover things about herself that seems hidden.
yes there are 1-dimensional villains that act like they usually do and get killed in early chapters but there are also people that react realistically to circumstances and stuff..
The story has a few major problems. A lot of name swapping where another name was used that didn't make any sense instead of the actual one. A lot of plotlines were incredibly warped, like he especially takes care that Lone never knows his name his Dave or anything. Give it a few chapters and suddenly she calls him Davey? The grammar was occasionally horrible too. The author needed 400 chapters to realize the infinitive of tired is tire and always wrote tier. So all in all uncomfortable to read but I liked the idea so I kinda read on. I'm done now. The end was unsatisfying in my opinion but what can you do. I don't really recommend it.
Did she seriously spare then one who killed her family because she loves him i swear u would be scared that my mother wuold beat me up in my after life for not getting revenge
this mc has to be the biggest noob ever its a descent story but mc so dumb getting fustrated
How this novel is connected to Stop, Friendly Fire! and what was earlier?