good book,one of the authors good books,great work.
Such a suspense-filling story?I love every bit of it♥️
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading.
i love your beginning, a nice introduction. your book really piqued my interest in the very beginning but I'm gonna complain about long paragraphs.otherwise, your work shows the effort put into it.
Ok, from what I've seen, Orion doesn't have many achievements after receiving his cultivation but I think it's acceptable because with his power it would be somewhat unrealistic to lose in a battle, the scenes between the female characters are played out, apparently a harem, I'm waiting for more content.
La historia se resume en que el protagonista hace cosas, puede hacerlo todo y punto, un Gary Tsu de manual, no existen dificultades, ni matices de ningún tipo, el personaje es una planilla, así de plano es, solo existen las afirmaciones en este fanfic y nada más
Loving the story so far! But I wish you’d update chapters more faster! I understand it takes time given how much you write :D but still great novel
is this story inspired by "Reincarnated Villain makes the heroines tearfully beg for forgiveness"?
MC has ho self awareness. Thinks he can negotiate everything with everyone.
first of all I'm not really into blacksmith novels, your story is okay except for some minor errors and the fact that Pato knows about the system, which is kinda because most system novels only the male leads know about the system. so it's kind of a breath of fresh air. I love it so far keep up the good work.
Elyon’s works are the best ? in book references have me cracking up while storylines have my wallet cracking open ?