Seems to have some influence from Japanese light novels. Good characters and an interesting plot so far, will be interesting to see what happens.
There are very few novels that can make me say this but this novel is absolutely one of them. It is a MASTERPIECE. That's it, that is all I have to say. Actually this is the novel that compelled me to write up a the story for my novel. 10/10 - 100% of the time. No doubt about it.
I love the world background, the writing and how the things are going, this story is so exciting, it makes you want to read more and more, thank you author <3, everytime I read a new chapter it brightens my day
I don't really get why the reviewers on the book says its unreadable or maybe because ive read many Google translated novels straight out of raws that my capabilities to read and understand book has numb my preference in translation.-so the writing quality is average for me nothing stands out in the translation not that it gives me headaches trying to read it or anything- the story development for me is so very fast it gives little to no room to breathe always having enemies to defeat one after another, i was thinking why does the story have to force it to become dependent on the military cant the people cultivate ive read that some of his officers cultivate since one time an officer enter the shadow of mc however why don't they have cultivation and the military system fuse to strengthen the army very big plot hole and the mc already have top cultivation arts at his sleeves but the author forces mc to have some excuse so that he can't cultivate the first cultivation art he got was very fine the biography clearly mentioned that the one who cultivated the art just got defeated because she was besieged/ambush and was only seriously injured not dead so it means that the devour martial art was very powerful i think it was the top martial art of the whole world the author doesn't expand much upon it but said one of the top but the drawback that the power of many people that the devour martial art absorbs doesn't mix well then how does the previous owner not just die upon cultivating it and become very powerful on top of thatand the second martial arts was the martial arts of the guardian which was the strongest cultivator on yhe world im sure we as the audience wouldn't want to have a castrated mc although powerful so the author makes the mc have an excuse to not cultivate the second martial arts as to not become castrated however another thing the mc stated that mc wants to cultivate to the point he would risk his life to jump on a cliff so im sure the mc would cultivate the devour martial art straight away even though was warned a little about the drawbacks and the devour martial arts should have something mentioned as to how mix/fuse/balance the absorb/devoured power since the martial art is top martial arts and why doesn't the mc focuse on researching the martial artists powers, martial arts, the body of of martial arts, body of beasts, body of demons how does the demons cultivate, bloodlines and many special materials like spirit plants , spirit materials/metals analyze them using super computer and AI and im sure the super computer has higher computing power than the martial artists it should be able to analyze and create many things not just analyze the boat and make a shield of it using electricity
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The premise that person gets into a video game is done already, many times. The unique thing about this is the world itself. It is a well written story with no dumb plot twist. The story is quite humorous while still having a sense of foreboding doom. It kinda compels one to keep on reading to satisfy the curiosity. If I had to nitpick something about the story it would be the length of chapters but author makes up for it by daily updates.I hope that the story and the author get what they deserve and it certainly deserves a place in Top 10.
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It good reader and a nice time killer. I want to binge read so I am letting the chapters pile up. But you should try to read this.????
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Ok first off, I’m really enjoying this. I’ve always enjoyed stories centred around shops and their op managers. Now onto my only complaint. Are you ready? Ok. Why did you have to end it when I just here wanting more!
Read the synopsis. Before you click 'read', think to yourself...doesn't the synopsis sound familiar? Oh my! Isn't this the same concept that appears at least twice every week? Hmm, maybe being generic isn't a bad thing - so you give it a try, read chapter 1 and find to your utter amazement that it's the absolute SAME scenario you've read a hundred times already. Nothing is changed apart from one tiny aspect of the system. The world chat is the same. The protagonist is the same. The supporting characters are the same. Even the plot is unchanged. If you still think this is worth a read, you're either new to Webnovel or...