the title definitely makes me wanna read the book
sorry i haven't posted a new chapter since
Author I really liked your Story. I hope that you will not leave the novel mid away and am waiting for the new chapters
Peak…………………………………………………………….... read it.
the writing quality at the first page is not good, though the story line will keep you hooked i hope the author can improve on it.oh and one thing to learned very late in my 3rd book was that always elaborate on the emotions of the Mc .
Very well written please keep it up author looking forward to more chapters ?
Honestly I’ve read the book till chapter 410 because it’s interesting but it’s a major slow read no one has moved forward for example FL and ML still are in the same place and the evil step sister and family and the others they are left still so what I’m saying it’s dragging on way to much I have spend a lot of money on this book so far and will not continue Good luck it has a great storyline but after reading 410 nothing has been moved forward still the same plot of crazy step sister and if the FL and ML are supposed to be strong and powerful but I don’t see that
Although I haven't read the whole novel yet. But I can already say that the novel is well worked out, from dialogues to the world in which friends found themselves. Almost immediately, friends run into various troubles, make new acquaintances and enemies. It can be seen how the author tries and gradually improves the quality of the presentation of the thoughts of both the main character and his friends. If you like isekai but without banal patterns, you will like this novel as the author tries in every possible way to avoid them. Unusually long chapters, but in each chapter you understand the moment in which the heroes found themselves.
universal phenomenon and what not.
Just as they were getting ready to shut off and leave. A black void suddenly appeared in the middle of the light then whoosh...
"Ah what? Okay i go now." Nursed left the room.
"Oh, sorry! I am Oliver Jones."