Please read this before you start the novel. ? First of all, there’s no rape or miscarriage in this book, but please note that the content will be explicit and may be sensitive for some readers. I value feedback and criticism, and I read and appreciate every comment and gift. If you spot a plot hole, please let me know, as sometimes the story takes over and I might forget to fill the gaps. Thank you so much for reading, and if you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask—I promise I don’t bite! ✨
sorry my bad, forgot to review amazing novel pls keep up the good work ?????????????.
I think this is good for now, Story progress is too little so i can't say for sure.
Hi, it's the author here. please show some support. support is the true motivation. i like to say just give this book a chance.The story is quite big, and I plan to make it over 2000 chapters. people who think romance is missing. I would like to say. after 100 chapters the romance starts. and in the first 300+ chapter it's only the beginning of the story. The true story will come after 300+ chapter. I request all readers to give this a try read 150+ chapters to judge it.
I just love this novel, it is a very impressive novel with minimal mistakes in English. Most novels I see have a very terrible English but not this novel. It's English is far better than most novels.
Writing quality can be better without the shortcuts of words sometimes. Words like nvm and btw just feels wrong when reading a book. Ik its easier and all that and everyone understand the meaning but it just feels wrong and could take down a lot in quality.Story development is to early to say something about at the moment. Character design is good about a 4 star id say. Explanations about characters could be made better, but overall design is quite good.The world building is also too early to say much about. The world building is a slow subject that should take time and many chapters that you dont have at the moment? Good read id say but could be better. Ik you want to make the best book you can and i hope you can make a much better storyline in the future when i come back for a reread. Hope you make a great book author.
The premise is pretty good, story has great potential
what a great novel it's rear to see angle novel and this novel mark one of the archangel novel that got me hooked. ?? ?
I really like this BL concept❤️❤️❤️❤️ waiting for next chapter
This story just keeps getting better and better I con't stop reading it! It's written so well and the current monster they're fighting against is so haunting!
Are you serious. chapter 53 is so good wtf
Thisb is the real deal looks like your still good with the pen/keyboard hope to see the story progress further