Decent concept, Interesting characters that are mostly fleshed out. It has some of the small issues of a boy with the mind of an old man not acting his age from time to time. However overall does an above average portrayal of this compared to most authors.However things very quickly go down hill because the author decides to do a massive time skip. Removing basically any chance the main character has to grow both in power and emotionally. I stuck with it to around chapter 500 because I genuinely enjoyed the beginning and was excited to see the growing phase. Unfortunately the author never really managed to capture my attention again after this.The writing is not very gripping or suspenseful. Like sure there is "supposedly" some sinister plan going on in the background. But there's no sense of urgency. The villains all fall flat, and the author doesn't really do a very good job at holding your interest. The whole novel reads closer to a slice of life with a harem of underage women than anything else.Overall I think boys aged 15 and under would find enjoyment in this story as it reads more like a harem of underage characters than anything deeper. Overall I'd say great characters and world building but terrible execution. Definitely a below average read.
it's a shame that webnovel keeps butchering these great novels with bad translations i was looking forward to reading this novel
I had not realized I had them shut. I was so angry and hurt. I felt the tears streaming the moment I opened my eyes. The eyes I looked into seemed to feel my pain as he leaned his forehead against mine.
Teret-Teret-Tet-Teret-Tetet!
Within a few days, the fever went away and she was healthy again. She looked for the mysterious book afterwards. But, she never found it. She continued her school as usual.
Ye Mu Xi sudah dikelas bersama Xan Xan duduk memperhatikan Ms Lena yang sedang menjelaskan materinya. Xan Xan menulis di buku tulisnya mencermati kata kata yang disampai kan oleh Ms Lena, sedang Ye Mu Xi memperhatikan, tapi tidak memahaminya, pikiran dia sedang melayang entah kemana.
my life is misserable,no ones teaches me to give all my life to a person i love thats why its a kind of easy to me to just change myself and destroy someone that my mother once try to me..but do you know what!i didnt let it happen cause i love my sisters that she would left as if its happen.maybe i dont know what is love but it doesnt matter as long as i made my rule in my own and do what is i think the right...now she just leave with my younger sister named christine and just wanted to be closed with me?is she joking me!!those years where i neaded my mom,those years that i need someone to make me realief,the years i asked why does it happened all to me,why they leave me..when caelle was back my kom just leave and do you know what!!i dont know what is right that time and i asked for gods help and asked him
He truly could fight against most low high-level with no problems.
All that glitters is gold
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
I wrote this novel randomly and now I want to continue it but first I think I should change name of the novel as the title does not match with the story. I hope you guys can give me some suggestions.
After the final instructions, the seven groups took steps towards the charter plane in the hangar. All personal phones and gadgets were confiscated to avoid compromising the whole operations.