LiamJohnsen
Daym, I was a victim and I didn't even know... ?
Guys i wanted tò start riding the novel After the manga so i wanted to ask at What chapter i Need tò start riding based on the manga
Currently reading just started will post review after I read at least 10-15 chapters.
Be prepared for bro to smile wryly twice every chapter
I thoroughly enjoyed it; it was a delightful experience from beginning to end. The main characters were all lovable, and the central couple was sweet. There was just the right amount of adventure to make the supernatural elements truly engaging.
I enjoy age progression cultivation novels, but after reading this one, I have several complaints:
- There's too much unnecessary dialogue.
- NPCs and bystanders, even children, often become commentators watching the show.
- There are many plot holes.
- The main character is reckless and overconfident.
- The villains are brainless and eagerly come forward to be humiliated.
- Characters' thoughts, especially those of the villains, are often spoken aloud.
- The main character is a Mary Sue.
- The villains follow the same script.
- The goals of the villains are absurd.
- All characters seem to have low IQs.
- The same routine becomes boring.
- There's too much face slapping.
- The fighting style is long-winded.
- Fights often drag on before the enemy suddenly powers up or gets seriously injured due to their own carelessness, only then quickly trying to finish off the enemy (repetitive).
- The author tries to build emotionally touching scenes but fails.
- I don't mind if the main character is brilliant, but why aren't the other characters smart too?
- Most side characters have copy-pasted personalities.
- The main character has strong plot armor.
The regret I had after clicking reveal... why is life like this?... regret always comes after failure
Im getting Brain cancer because of those f*ck*ng names why can't there be a guy named Bob or something
The story is excessively drawn out – and by that, I mean EXTREMELY excessively drawn out! What could have easily been summarized in just two paragraphs has been needlessly stretched across ten lengthy chapters, consisting primarily of nothing but side characters' speculation and their viewpoints.
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Let me give you an example: The main character is about to be born, but instead of just telling us what happens, we spend two whole chapters hearing what the other characters think might happen. Finally, the main character is born, and then we get two more chapters where the other characters react with excitement, surprise, and more guessing. And to top it off, there's another extra chapter just to describe all the amazing things that occurred during the birth and another two chapters of excitement, surprise, and more guessing.
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It's pretty much 10% story and 90% side character Bullsht.
Nah, his head looks elongated and dispoportional.
Pls when is the next chapter going to be update it has already been a very long time since you update the last chapter or what is going on
So I finally finished the novel. Gotta say, the story was pretty funny. While the end was slightly anticlimactic, for the most part, the story is funny and not really a serious story. Though IMO, the story was at its funniest at about 2/5th of the way (enough to put me constantly in tears), the story still consistently gave me a chuckle throughout. But this is on the premise that you can laugh at the MC’s actions. If you don’t like him, you’ll most likely hate him throughout the entire novel. His personality becomes somewhat milder near the end, but it’s still pretty static throughout. Super outrageous, very shameless, talking mad shjt throughout the entire novel to not only his enemies, but sometimes even his friends and underlings. Yeah, MC’s kinda a djck in general, but it’s pretty funny seeing him be extra djckish to others (racking up those rage points) and getting away with it.The story, while it isn’t really serious, does have some story structure to it that you don’t always see in Chinese novels. There are multiple storylines being juggled throughout it and all of them connect to the overall story arc in some way, which would affect MC’s situation, even if the MC himself isn’t a big part of them, so I do like that the world is fleshed out to us readers so we know what’s happening behind the scenes.I do like that all the powers in the novel seem fragmented, even those in different worlds. Many times I’ve seen novels where the MC’s world is fragmented but they’re facing a united monolith enemy so the MC has to unite his fragmented world to fight them. That’s not the case here. Not only are all the powers still fragmented throughout, even the different worlds’ factions are infighting, so there’s a lot of chaos on all sides that get taken advantage of. And many times, these factions will try to wipe each other out, too, just like how the MC’s world’s factions will, so everything feels a bit more organic than in other novels.Speaking of the worlds, there are mainly three worlds involved, the typical cultivation world MC starts in, a more modern-day technology world (not the same world MC comes from), and a Lovecraftian world. Three big worlds with their own factions fighting each other, and infighting in those factions, too. There are also secret factions, lone rangers who do whatever they want and cause trouble on their own just like MC, etc. The series is surprisingly packed for a relatively shorter novel (only 660 chapters compared to many other novel’s 1000-4000 chapters).While not a perfect novel by any means, there was a lot going on, enough to keep the pace going without dragging the story out. There are only a few points in the story where MC is truly disadvantaged, but it’s a result of his own hard work, I’d say. When his power is “making people mad = increases cultivation”, he shjt-talked his azz off and worked hard to become shameless— I mean OP, so no complaints here.The ending I feel was open enough for there to be a sequel if the author ever wanted to make one. MC finally gets what he wants. MC’s dad finally gets what he wants. Everything’s all fine and dandy. All and all, a good funny novel to waste a week on.…well, my only gripe is that MC’s a bit of a djck to his son, too, but other than that, good novel. Maybe that could be the foundations to an afterstory or a sequel? Who knows…
