Like I said in the comments the story is really well written but man I just hate the kind of main character you produced. At first I thought his arrogance and narcissistic scene in the beginning was just humor and him joking. But no that’s his character he’s arrogant, a narcissist and is always on a power trip. I can’t really say he’s intelligent because he hasn’t done anything intelligent except for the headmistress chapter. I also feels like he relies too much on the system, I feel like adding him being able to buy breakthrough was kind of dumb(btw I love op mcs) and it feels like he will never achieve anything on his own. That’s it like I said the story is really good but imo the mc is a 1 star character.
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It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
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An intriguing tale that has plenty of humor but is a little lacking in describing certain characters.
This is great. It's rare to see a mecha novel but it reminds me of a game I used to play called Front Mission 3. Nostalgia came in as I read through it. World building is good, plot is also fast so it's not boring to read. Keep wrirting and improving. Looking forward to reading more of it soon.
Keep them coming. Aaaaasaah ya This book keeps getting better. Also please look at the last comment I made.
I love the unique approach to the usual FL/ML setup that you see in these types of novels. The writing quality is great, and the effects used in certain scenes caught me off guard with their creativity.The only thing I can complain about is the jarring POV switches. But once you get past that and immerse yourself in the character dynamic between Adam and Eve, it's peak cinema.
If only the translator or author could update frequently and have a better grammar, the novel and story will be excellent, better than now.
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