Leoraveen
Reviewing after 15 chapter Initially I started this story with zero expectations but color me surprised the author really did a fantastic job in bringing this story to life Congrats author ? Talking about the story- it follows the general isekai troupe of being transmigrated Into another word with slight twist. Now, Now let's not spoil it.now moving on to writing quality, i must say it's really neat and nice without any errors or grammatical mistakes that amateur authors do. The author really puts efforts for readers to show the world according to the mc's pov.The author has neatly balanced the pacing between fast paced and slow paced scenes making it thrill to read without getting boredIt also has some unique power system which i believe the author will elaborate on later onStory devlopment is well balanced with direct conversation with slight humor adding a enigmatic touch to the novelFor character design I can say not many many characters have been introduced yet but it is till quite good.Updates are regular, personally i think if possible the author should improve the update stability to 2 chapter daily inorder to gain more attention.World building needs to be explored yet, but personally i think the world is gonna be big looking at the effort author is putting.For now I will leave this review and shall return after it has like 250+ chapter coz I hate cliffhangers
I love how lively Zayn is, and the friendship shared between the characters. Excalibur's sass is going to be an excellent addition to the stability of the group; I can't wait to see how the other two react to the new spear!
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I believe it is going to be a really interesting story. A magical world filled with it's own secrets and myths, witches and heros made; waiting for us readers and for the writer himself to reveal. Please keep updating for the sake of these really interesting characters you have created. Good Luck!
Как опытный боець в вопросах манг и ранобэ скажу свое мнение.История поначалу захватывающия быстро деградирует в сторону гаремника нулевых, сюжет очень быстро сошёл на нет, гг несмотря на сильные ограничения сразу находит способ стать имбой, все девушки которых добавляють в сюжет, созданы лишь для того чтобы попасть в гарем гг, никакого развития второстепеных персонажей, более того некоторые из них откровено пустые и даже лишние в истории, гг вроде умный и жёсткий, крамсает бандитов направо и налево, но стоит увидеть девушку сразу отключаеться от логики и разума, много сцен просто для пафоса гг, конечной цели у автора как завершить историю НЕТ, если ему удастся как нибудь написать историю до конца, даю зуб что все девушки стануть женами гг, прорисовка мира, политики, культури, магии, откровено плохая.Моя оценка 4 из 10Единственный плюс рисовка в манхве хорошая, художник действительно постарался, без нього не поставил бы даже 2 звёзд
good book I should look for book as good as this..
Angel and Devil are creatures of Dark and Light who lived hostile each other for hunder centuries.
What is it purify room looks like? I'm pretty curious right now.
2. Ridicoulus Human II (Uncommon)
Okay now, the rank 1 is called Mamat and he is also our class leader, the name is cool, not like my friend Kenji, which is often ridicoulus, because his name sounds funny.
Everyone is in shock. But i'm not, I also know it.
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
