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The way he moved, reminded me of something but I decided to ignore it. I have a job to do and I would be damned if I don't complete it. So without hesitation whatsoever I waved at him while holding my package.
I took a deep breath and exhaled.
His eyes shone darkly and then he crushed those cards then burned them with fire then he turned smiled and said to no one "I will be back"
"Where are you taking me?" I ask, following her lead.
Kazuki and Kaede's mouths were open too like they were waiting to catch some flies for lunch.
"I don't get why Gerald lost all his students though. It's just you and me who he teaches, and he still rambles on about the ethics of learning magic! He could've easily taught us how to fly by now"
Griss sidestepped away from Rose, realizing she had stopped next to him and looked nervous again. He licked his lips, likely to moisten them a bit before answering me. " They are treated as a part of the Ring Bearers person. I'd still put her away before going into town though. The Guard are under Brits rule, they will try to take it."
"Undead! Undead! Ick! No mate! Kill!!!" At least I think that's what the one in her grasp was screaming. The fact she actually cut him off after the second 'undead' by biting into his neck, causing the rest of his words to be a gurgling mess made it difficult.
- While You ... -the former Takato words choking in his throat. He did not want to look like a victim and evade some responsibilities. So he just went on from there and not go with anything else.
Hirano, when he was about to clarify his version of events, was interrupted by a loud voice, that voice was from Souichiro who was accompanied by Yoshioka and a few other guards.
- Leave two lines between paragraphs. This not only makes your novel seem a lot cleaner and easier to read, but it also makes chapters seem way longer ;P.
I told some Of my friends they looked at me confused some even thought I was lying
