Hey Vsauce, Micheal here. Our MC's journey is a coincidence. Or is it?
The story is fun to read. The writing quality is good, smooth and detailed. The Fl's personality is likable and the other characters too. good work.
I love this book. The author has my support. Keep it going.
yes this is a member of one of the newer plots. i don't know why all the reviews were nothing but intrigued and none shared how this is not for everyone. the path to this MCs power is to basically kill any and all humans/cultivators in his dungeon.In chapter 37, he explicitly states his intention to conquer his surroundings and leave nothing but bones.I've enjoyed this kind of plot in revenge stories until it got too cringe. but this time there's no other motivation than expanding the dungeon. the motive is not half as compelling.no I'm not a "oh the lack of morality! what an abomination!"i just look for something else in my reads. this doesn't interest me. I'm not particularly interested in following this MC and his contradictory behavior that gives him a harem.
Typical chinese story where problem come after mc to his door even if he stays at home all year around... also its full of young master stuff to the brim... also its no different from typical stupid mc who just won't backoff even if it means getting in trouble.... and author constantly made powerfull enemy coming after our mc one by one for apparant illogical coincidence which makes mc life always under the crisis.....its preety much very very illogical that how even if mc stay at home all the time 1 level higer villain always keep coming after him.
Good progress. Continue to post new chapters!
Nice start for a story. It gets intense every time ?. Especially, Daniel, he is shown as serious and broken at the same time. If you add more scenes about his last maybe it will give more inside about what made him like this. Anyhow, the story is amazing looking forward to reading more about it.
Writing Quality and Stability of Updates: 5/5 on both, Simply I couldn't ask for anything anything better as the author never fails to deliver us with one chapter every day. The author has a good command over English, certainly not a surprise considering he hails from a natively-english speaking countryStory Development: 5/5, I was a little skeptical at first due to the sypnosis, Kind of just came off as an another local waste rises up to be a phoenix with dragon queen. But glad to say that I was wrong, very wrong. The average aptitude of protagonist is barely ever mentioned in chapters and even if they are mentioned I don't remember any of them being in contempt which is quite a relief. The plot of this story is progressing at a gradual speed, not too fast not too slow, just how I and I imagine a lot of people would like it. Nothing cliche seems to come up yet which is good.Character design: This is I believe the greatest part about this novel, as every character, starting from the protagonist to the garbage picker has a certain depth of character and each of them seem to posses a rational mind( it pains me to think something so common such as this is rare to find in this CEO-novel filled website ). The protagonist has shown no signs of possessing a moral compass which to me is a plus point but I'd understand if that turns you off from this story. I'm pretty sure he'd only get colder and more sophisticated as he progresses. Would Background: I have nothing to say about this one as we only know about his sect till yet(not that I am complaining). But referring from how this novel never manages to disappoint me I am certain that the world background as it gets revealed won't be bad.
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I’m going to review this for you. This story is actually good. If one day it was to be a shounen, it would make a decent one, for this ill leave a good rating. Also, pretty good book for a single writer.
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