EpicBuddie123
I loved it mix of horror, mystery & suspense. It was going very interesting. The way the girl transformed into ghost was really awesome.....
Not bad, although I feel like its lacking a bit in the action part. Its really good though for someone who likes the soccer genre. Update faster and I'll drop Powerstones everyday
I think the raw is this 神宠与我有缘 but I’m not too sure.
UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Where is the UPDATE???????!!!!!....................................................................,............
Why does some people drop bad reviews?? Maybe some people don't like the story or just straight out toxic... Anyway this is like Low Dimension Game but much better.!!!!! I mean f*ck*ng MORE BETTER... The adding of the player was good in my opinion..The beginning was rough but after that it is very good...What I like the most is the history of world.. It get the idea in our prehistoric history...The story is quite logical( if you ignore the sorcery,alchemy and etc...)Overall, it was a good novel...Hope that this will be picked...But I doubt that this will be picked...Because the editor don't know how to choose and has pea sized brain......?!!!!!!
I can't make an educated review just based on the current number of chapters released but one thing is sure i.e. it has potential but somewhere it seems something is missing. More focus should be given on character development and world background too. Hope it's content quality further improve with time. By that time I'll rate 5*****.
Review cause novel is 1st person, has good grammar, and tons of tiddi- I mean good plot. Also author is chill...But mostly because of the tidd- I mean plot.
Shameless review by the author.My sincere apologies, this is to inform you that...I was finding that things were not going right so I had deleted chaps from 17 onwards.I want any one who stop by hidden door could enjoy it to fullest.I hope my effort could bring you joy and another good experience.This is my first novel please spare your reviews and share your thoughts and shower your support through power stones.
