This is also the same as novel about passive skill, at first the story is ok and the explanation and the usage of the system going well.. but after 100-200 ch the usage of the system was not highlight anymore and the story was only about tournament this tournament that... The amount of system usage was too minimal that i lost my interest.. the plot was not bad like other novel, but hmmm i wish it could progress like novel ten consecutive draw or invicible uncle grandmaster.. at least they highlight the importance or the effective of system.. in this novel, the function of the system not wide enough.. eg. the lifestyle skill like alchemy, formation master, blacksmith, cook, and other skill were not explain enough.. even the power level was not explain enough... Again it was ok to read but not enjoyable enough.. the concept of download was interesting enough that he could include the usage of perception in the system like as his cultivation progress, his sense will also grow and the system can detected the others easier with wider distance.. hmm maybe the author not read enough of this genre to incorporate the other system function in this novel..
Noice
I giving u five stars coz I don't want u drop such an amazing novel....okaYyy
Hi, I'm the author of this story. I want to take a moment to thank you all for always reading the new chapters and taking the time to check out my work. Your support means a lot to me!
By the way, stay tuned for more epic battles in the upcoming chapters. If you're new to the story or just exploring, I recommend checking from chapters 20-40 for some of the most exciting developments. Chapters 1-18 might be a bit slow/boring, but they lay the groundwork for the adventure ahead.
Happy reading!
Cool! More chapters please.
good story though, but the downside is that u spend a lot of time explaining irrelevant things. i mean i skipped 5 chapters due to reading things that makes no sense. but the story is really good, keep it up
Very great novel, been following since on royalroad. Drake is an absolute unit and I love his interactions with the other characters.we've not seen much of the bigger world since we're still in the tutorial, but I can see a lot of potential for the world building.Solid grammar, great power system.an awesome novel all round
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
the story so far is the chasing ark of the novel the prison guard only realized I escape after reading the novel that I write or something like that. it is stupidly the same of that novel in terms of plot
Im shamelessly writing myself another review since webnovel hates putting my stories in the algorithm. YOU CANT STOP ME WEBNOVEL!!!
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This is a novel for gentlemen of culture l0ol. Surprisingly this actually has a plot with some mystery. While I am enjoying it so far, if it delves to deep into cultivation territory I'm going to drop it like it's hot.