This story has an amazing concept but then this is hampered by the few grammatical errors which makes the reading experience a hassle.Character description also needs a bit of workApart from that, I feel this novel has potential and would love to see just how far it can go
This novel is really cool. I like the development and the flow of your plot. You make it easy for the reader to understand your world and that's something amazing. The character design is fantastic and the writing quality is truly well done.Author, I will follow your story, it really got me hooked. Keep up the good work!
This is hands down an amazing novel, you can see how hard the author worls on it throughout the chapters, and it has interesting, fun chapters I would very much recommend reading as it would be very worth your time :)
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This story will be based on the life of Maddoxx, a technically normal guy, who discovers his origins and his father past. Trying to follow his steps, while protecting friends and important people to him. Most of the time we will have mercenary missions, crazy action and even more crazy people. But if we just put characters like that they will be empty. So we will have some romance between every mercenary and his dear-half. After all guy deserves a good girl to welcome him after a tough mission.Drama is a good thing for the plot and character background. Everyone have their own **** to hide or to regret. I am not that kind of guy who forgives everything. I'm not the guy that gives a plot armor to the main character and make them immortal or some ****. Everyone dies after taking a good shot. Everyone can be killed while sleeping. This is a 'real' novel, it happens in our own world with some real facts, sometimes with real data, and i will try my best to make everything plausible. But keeping the fun of the read. What i am trying to say is that this is not a transmigration/reincarnation/System ****, this is a novel where our mc can die anytime, he is not invincible, he is not OP, and he is not dumb. Our mc likes pus***, he likes girls, he likes money, he like guns, he like his friends. I have some goddamn missions in mind, i have some incredible ideas for the plot. If you guys give me a chance, I will show all of them to you. Sorry for making it long. Enjoy.
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A good thriller, every chapter takes the story to the next level. Story building is on point. The book is written on facts, which is nice to come by.
Strong start, abrupt ending. But it is better to have an ending that have this dropped so thank you author for keep writing until the end even if you are not really fond of writing.I give this 5* because I enjoying it.
An early review But very well written, The characters are so relatable and nicely expressed, I read through the 7 chapters without sleep at 4 in the morning?can't wait to read more
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Honestly this novel has a lot of potential, it could be up there in the future with author's pov, But as of now it could get a lot better. Author you should put more weight into your story, for example we never knew how many students are actually attending the academy or how many teachers are teaching what subjects and how the educational system actually works, and for being called the 'best' academy it's a little bit weird how a mere C-rank could become a teacher, considering that they are teaching nobility, you know like... Noble households that are probably filled with S or SS rank members. You could also expand the main cast, I think 3-5 characters is a little bit on the small side but it wouldn't an issue if they get enough character development
Its not your typical otome villain story. Its actually good man. Its been a lovely experience so far. Thanks for your work here dude.(BDW I'm from the future, so if u have any queries, feel free to ask..!!)