TheCollector

honestly when I started reading it was good it has a decent background for characters, it also had a really good story, I can not wait to see how the story progresses.

The initial chapter was good. Endearing kind of good. I like how you describe your characters author! It's well presented and they gave me a picture of who they should be. I mean you gave them life and not some bland description of their actions.  And I think that's really really nice. Good job there author! Keep up the good work!