bad MC and very unlikely system. Couldn't get pass chapter 20 because of the FORCED PLOT that the author put in there. In one chapter he gives a customer a cold icy face for a pity reason being that she has a pet that he likes and he also ask for money from the customers just for a tip. I mean the concept is good but a good concept doesn't make a good story if the MC is terribly written with little to no character development.
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Hello author,Just finished the 7 chapters and the writing is pretty good. Please do you plan on continuing? ( i pray you do!!) It will be a shame to stop now ...snif snif.
if I honestly say. I was reluctant to read cuz the author is new and ..I was really in verge of dropping the novel at the 40 like something chapters ...I really hated when the uke tortured to death and the cheating scene also...but I don't want to drop the novel at sad part ..I want to see the happy part ..so I hardened my heart and read and I'm really glad after that the story really develops well the comedies among frds make me laugh hard totally fabulous and love between their partners, their little son's crushes ...I really want to read bunch of chapters pls author updates us more chaps... thank u for u r hard work ...hope u do many more stories ..luv u
THIS!!This is fire?! The mc feels like an actual person who doesn't jump into trouble the moment he gets angry, his opponents are not retarded and the side characters actually have like real feelings and character development (who knew). It's miles better that any of the trash novels here. Definitely recommends it!