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Honestly he should kill both marines and pirates . I think the mc is kinda dumb anyway i am at ch21 so
Linglong getting to annoying at this point. mostly half of the chapters is her instigating sexual acts like did she have anything interesting to do? like the downgrade of her character is so hateful
Disappointing romance novel with flat characters and predictable plot twists. Lacked depth and failed to engage emotionally
Really enjoying this book and am looking forward to more chapters
you are over exaggerate every chapter with more useless and radiant expressions to express their surroundings and making it lengthy unnecessarily it will get boring to read if you go with same pace.
This is one of the most unique and interesting Novels I’ve read. The power system is different and characters feel more than cardboard cutouts, and the story Also flows in a way that it doesn’tdepend on cliches and plot devices. Unfortunately it’s almost as if the story is too unique. It has too much going on at one time that it becomes confusing, in the first 10 chapters you don’t know if it’s going to be a generic urban fantasy or a sci-fi drama. It overwhelms the reader with to many components of the story at the same time. I think the author focused too much on trying to be different that he/she bit off more than they can chew and it becomes confusing. For the first chapters of the story, it feels like there isn’t a plot and thing just happens; so as a reader and hard to follow the story. The reader isn’t allowed to infer what’s going on in the story and understand the emotions of the MC and other characters because the author jus tells us, it’s almost as if we are not reading story but a summary of things that happened. In conclusion I fell the author bit more than he can chew and didn’t give a chance for the plot to flow naturally. Oddly enough I kinda wish the author took a more cliched and generic approach and build upon it so we can, as readers can understand the story better. Sometimes it’s better to take a well trodden path and build on it than to build your own and forget to enjoy the scenery on the way. Best if luck and to the author ✍️ hope you keep writing this great novel
Reviewer here. Reading status ch 53 currently.The story is great and it really highlights a part of the isekai genre rarely discussed.Discrimination and the fact that it's not THAT easy to adapt in a new world, especially if the God that sent you to that new world didn't give you beyond broken cheat skills.This novel has dark themes and easily highlights the reality of a planet inhabited by a multitude of races; all with their own goals and agendas.On a side note. If you're a preacher for human supremacy, the type that hails humans as beings only beneath God but above all others, this is not a novel for you.
the writing is poor, details don't match up, it's very basic with so many plot holes and loops I'm surprised webnovel actually picked it up
Miss you. I wish you well in everything you do in life author. Just the small bit of story you had developed was amazing and I would love more just doesn’t seem like it’ll happen sadly.
This is my first time writing anything other than short stories in school. Please give this a read and tell me what you think about it. All constructive criticism is welcome. Over time my writing will improve. This is going to be a decently long story about Havok and his companions striving to achieve their dreams.
The realms descriptions are very detailed, and the story is slightly more unique than usual, so overall it's a pretty enjoyable novel.Idk how the trial reads work, but i hope this gets picked