A non-berserk berserker!? how incredibly rare! It's a pretty interesting story so far which is saying something because I'm not really into gaming novels. My only complaint is that we don't have games like this in real life.
Hi it's me again (Noobamstard). Currently I read chapter 1-10. The story looks like it is going to be a weak to strong type in which the MC trains up in another world while he is asleep. The MC is a resident of the slums in which the majority of the population of this world lives. He randomly gains a system that gives him acces to a game like world. The world background is decent. It is to early to talk about story developement. The MC seems to be the carefree type that classifies things he gets as "trash" or "OP" which is kind of confusing since his sitiuation as a poor buffon in the slums that has to shoulder the responsibility for his little sister stands in contrast to such behaviour. The grammar is substandard but okay given that this is Webnovel. Still I recommend an editor (it can be a friend that is as good as you with English but two pairs of eyes see more than one). Anyhow I am still exited about this story and will likely read on. However, there is one thing that is bugging me: Why is your novel uploaded twice on Webnovel? I will not continue giving feedback before that is solved. Having this novel twice will ultimatley upset your readers and stop you from advancing in the rankings. Keep on writing,Noobamstard
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I hope this gets picked up I find it humorous and well translated. I really enjoy the MC's jpurney so far and I LOLed a few times and I find that to be a good sign for a story.
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I just know that this book has a real west African settings and all the areas are truely places in Africa the book is something different believe me
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I have read a lot of stories, and while the grammer of this one is a little lacking, overall it will keep you interested. I really hope that the eventual ending pays justice to this story. It has real potential and I could even see it being made into a tv show or anime.
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Raw title: 我死党穿越了Status: 873 Chapters (Completed)Tags: Urban life,Rating 8.7/10 (77 Votes).................................................................