master1
Boring. The content is the same as most of the novels out there. Nothing unique. Just the names are different.
The story seems to borrow a lot from D&D and other sources, which can be a slight distraction, if you are familiar with those or looking to dig deeper into possible story paths. But if this doesn't bother you, this is a solid story, with a seemingly stable (read: not a total idiot who falls for or charms every female he comes across) MC. The concept of the necromancer, whose first priority is planting and protecting trees is great. World building is a little confusing and there are a few errors of syntax or names here and there. Easy to fix. Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. Overall recommendation.
I’m really enjoying the story! I like the fights and cool powers!
hello, this is my first book, and my current plans for Alex Muller have for yet been fully decided, so I hope you will join me in the creation
The story is good, it's a good read, but SIMP ALERT!!! MC is an IDIOT!! AND A SIMP!!!
OMG! I really love this story ? I can't stop reading. It's so fluffy, hot and funny at the same time. What a great work, I'll wait for another chapter.
You are writing a nice book as a fellow author I can tell that your story has very good potential keep writing and we will be always waiting for new releases
sounds interesting. would be a 4.2 but character design got reduced to 1 star because a female lead inside male lead pilot read. ??????????????????????????????
this story doesn't make any sense, I expected it to be really good according to its name and introduction paragraph. but it's complete rubbish.
This a really good novelHave a lot of potential ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
One of the best novels on here with a refreshing MC. I adore Whittaker which is why I don’t understand. Author why would you stab us in the heart like this? ????
Only a few chapters in and here is my review. Professional story! That's all that comes to mind when I read this book. It's very detailed and has a nice plot. The author seems to have a set direction for the story, which gives the writing a sense of purpose (something not seen often on these webnovel books). I noticed a few mysteries already popping up that are itching for an answer.No big cons with this book. It's another great system read that could find a solid fan base on webnovel. I see a bright future for this book and the author. (4.8 whish it could be adjusted a bit higher)On a side-note : Idk how you will do it, but a story needs something that stands out in the beginning. Whether its a unique MC(blind, deaf, ect.), setting (growing up in a dumpster), or a mystery. You have some of these, but the truly great stories put their own twist. Just my little opinion, nothing more :)
