Ah wth, what happened. This batch of new novels is bad. Godammit, what the h*ck happened to I'm a Wasteland Giant and Everyone Becomes Demonized. You didn't go thru with your prmises Webnovel. In the first place, who is the one who decides what new novels show up. i will stalk you.
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I know that this story is based on the idea of plagiarizing modern day copyrighted materials and turning them into profits in an alternate universe. Yes. That is true and the writers have never denied this fact.However, if you give this novel a chance you’ll realize just how much of a gem it is. It’s a genuinely funny comedy story that is not afraid to highlight and satirize the greed of modern corporations. Highly recommend for a good laugh.
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I was intrigued by the premise, but, eh, delivery was kinda weak.It's clear that the author isn't too well versed in English at least in the early chapters. Hopefully writing this helped them get better.The flow is actually pretty good, but the 'conversational' tone the... narrator? takes is mildly annoying. It feels like it's trying to be funny/clever too hard, but ends up awkward.The characters feel a bit artificial, as if they are defined by a trope or cliche that is stuck to their forehead. I'm not saying that you won't find people like them in reality, but they feel like those homeschooled kids that can't read the mood.All in all, it's obvious that it's a beginner work and if you're fine with that then the premise shows a lot of promise. If there's ever a rewritten version of this that cleans things up, I'll give it another shot.
The author is a very talented individual in the art of character design, able to generate long fluid conversations that seem to go on forever which many novels lack.In my opinion, however, that is a flaw.The conversations go on long enough that it starts to give me a headache. The author puts heavy emphasis into the conversations and does not balance it out with the world background.The author does not seem as good with the world background.For example, the prince's castle at the beginning is merely referred to as a "castle" with no additional details. I get a mental image when the term is mentioned, but I get a stale one which has no details.Another example is when the MC is escaping along with her friend, yet most of the writing is down on their conversations rather than their surroundings. In reality, I doubt two people would have the energy to converse when they are fleeing for their life.Other than that, the author does put in the details when it comes to fighting, so props to that. The writing quality is very good and the author does seem to have a direction he/she wants to go in.A personal complaint would be the time skip at the beginning not long after the MC arrives into this world. I feel like a lot of potential was wasted in what could have been invested into character growth. It is like saying the MC survived a life or death situation at point A and then somehow got over it and became stronger in the future at point B.This is merely my opinion however, so just take it as creative criticism. I have not even fully read the novel since I became overwhelmed by the long conversations which take up half of each chapter.
I am at a crossroad here.......I want to give author 5 stars cause his writing, structure and all that **** is GOLD, Large no of chps DOPE........BUT see, 2 things I just read in this book make me think its trash.they are1- MC defends some slutty chick that tried get some dude beat up by her BF [who she cheated on] cause that dude was ugly, but then gets almost punched by her BF who found out she was cheating.....MC defends her .2-Read CHP 9.....relationships are forced as ****......like its shallow, not new author level ****......just shallow..so yah'
Let's see, a story with greek mythology, check!Good characters, check!Good premise and world also check!Good job, Author you got something good here, the only problem would be a few grammar mistakes here and there (but like I always say it does not ruin or hinder a good story and can be fixed with ease and time) so keep going Author!