Krisnan
I do recommend this book it is a good read.
After reading first 17 chapters here is my review.Writing Quality: Writing Quality is good without any spelling mistakes or any grammatical errors. The sentences framed are easy to understand without any colourful words making it pleasing to the eyes. If u like novels with don't use complex sentence with direct conversations with slight comedy u might give this a try. Story development (CHP 17) is consistent and does not jump from one point to some other random point like some other writers do leaving their readers to guess what happened between.The story initially may seem somewhat cliche but hey as a responsible reader we must leave sometime for the authors to weave their story right?Update stability is Ok..might seem low for some MTL Veteran readers but I prefer quantity over quantityWorld background: The world background hasn't fully explored yet I advise author to prepare a glossary chapters for it as it might help readers to give them some basic understanding.overall this story has potential and I hope u(author) keep cooking and get contracted ASAP?I will return when it has over 150 chapter
"Eh ... I don't know yet but, whoever is it, definitely a good person. How hard is it to make a good person?" Light said casually and confidently.
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This meant that if he worked hard he would not have a problem in his cultivation road, the inheritance was one of the most important if not the most important thing there was in Pill Island. For the young mistress to give to Zero meant that she saw that he had talent in Pill Refinement and she wanted him to be the new pill master of Pill Island.
He could just look for the right prophecy and no more need for us to undergo struggles...
Boo's hand hovered over Jem's head.
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"Are you thinking that you can marry into our family with just that?" He asked
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
"This is one of the Book of Life's ability. From now on, I'll ask you to train him and treat him as your other half—since you'll be spending a large amount of your time there, this is something you can do right?"
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
