christianescaro
I'm writing this review after reading the auxiliary chapter and the prologue, the world building of this story is unique and original, not like anything used in any other stories before, I mean getting ability through flowers that grows from the ground where the blood of the lords (which means gods) seeped into when they died fighting the demons
the book seems interesting I'll follow up
— The Immortal Fate Shield System ⚡Q) How is the fate of characters determined in the novel?A) The readers themselves decide the fate of the characters! ?Here’s how it works: If a character, including the MC, gets a lot of negative feedback due to their actions, they will face consequences in future chapters. ? On the other hand, if they are praised, they will receive rewards! ? This system gives you the power to influence the story like the Heavens themselves. Want to see a character punished? ⚡ It will happen.Whether it’s influencing romantic outcomes ? or affecting a character’s fate, your comments will shape their future. The MC might face challenges or even be rewarded based on your feedback.Rules:To participate, simply leave your thoughts in the comments of each chapter ?. All feedback will be reviewed, and its effects will be seen in future chapters. For example, criticize ‘Little Fatty’ enough in Chapter 10, and by Chapter 24, expect a thunderous bolt ⚡️ to punish him for his actions!This system applies to all characters, but remember—the author still holds the 'Higher-up' privileges to balance the story ⚖️. Feel free to ask any questions about how this system works in the comments below! ?___Common Doubts and Concerns!Q) Can my comments really affect the plot? A) Yes! The author reviews every comment, and the story will evolve based on your feedback. ?Q) Can my favorite character be at risk? A) It's possible! But just as you can criticize characters, you can also defend them with positive comments. ?️Q) How quickly will changes happen?A) The effects of your feedback will be seen in future chapters, depending on the volume of comments. ?Q) What if I want a character to survive but others don’t? A) It depends on the collective feedback. However, the author will ensure that no major developments disrupt the story’s natural flow. ?
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I love detective stories. The author has written something with potential. My review is based on the first 4 chapters. We have the intro of a professional detective, then the mc becomes a detective.He gets his first case and begins his investigation. The pacing is decent and there are a lot of details everywhere. The only thing I dislike is like the forced romance at the beginning. Other then that it is pretty good currently!
First time I will read a book by this spectacular author Glimmy I have read only read half of her two books of her but this time I will go all in Waiting to dive in Violet’s world with her four alphas in new darker version werewolf stories
I love this story so far. I can’t wait to see where it’s headed. The characters are great. The story line is great. The only thing that I would change is how often it is updated. It says 1 chapter per week but we don’t even get that. In that respect it seems like we have to wait forever for things to happen. If something is going on that the author can’t update as often as they would like to then I wish they would just post a little note like other authors do to give us a heads up we will be waiting for other chapters. We don’t need to know the reasons just give us a little side note. Hope the story picks up again.
The story is looking good looking forward to it
Okay now, the rank 1 is called Mamat and he is also our class leader, the name is cool, not like my friend Kenji, which is often ridicoulus, because his name sounds funny.
My father looked at me with a slanted smile and mumbled. "Hah, sucker child."
Little Lucy clearly retained this nature as well, perhaps due to her young age and knew without being told just what Nathan's problem was. She tottered to his side and lifted up her tiny watering can for his use. The pair shared a smile and the plants were watered and Ren Zexian came up with an idea that may solve his worries. However, there was just one obstacle; how to convince the key to his thoughts to cultivate first...
"Those bastards! I knew they were too quiet so this was their plan. I will crush them I was plotting against the wrong enemy!" June angrily shouts while slamming his hand on the table causing it to break.
