I was enjoying the first 200-300 chapters or so but i really cant read how Fl is just getting walked over by ML and getting sexually assulted and nobody in the comments seems to be bothered by it
A poorly designed world that runs on gags, the characters seem like they are pulled out of a book at the 400th chapter, which incidentally they actually might be. The system is awesome however it is hardly ever used and in the first 30 ish chapters nothing good happens other than watching a grown man be hilariously petty in an evil sense, it's fun but it isn't special, and unless the system is brought out more or he starts a new story/adventure as his OP self the novel just isn't great yet.
Came for the harem tag..... Expecting love comedy or what-not, but nah only serious things happening.... sooo I'm leaving I guess, but here 5 star for elf.- LifeIsAboutChoicesI read for enjoyment and to imagine cool scenarios otherwise impossible. this story started out with both however quickly became some sort of dark detective story i really couldn't get behind. it was no longer fun to read and i felt more sad than happy reading. no shame to author-san he has some of the best writing ive seen on this site in a long time, but i can't force myself to read any more.P.S i know that the conflict gets settled but i can't imagine this scenario switching back to the rom-com esk scenario it was before. and i dont want to read through the rest of the conflict for the reasons stated above.Thank you Author-San it was enjoyable while it was enjoyable. - A3
Easily one of my favorite new novels on the site/app. Great characters and it has a very strong start that keeps you wanting more and more. The writing quality and overall theme reminds me of something that MLB would write. MC needs to conquer witches to get more power...if you know what I mean ? MC is almost like a spiritual successor of Su Yang from dual cultivation. MC also has a system but it isn't stupidly overpowered and serves as a guide for him to grow on his own. I believe the system doesn't give him power that he didn't have..but unlocks the potential that was already there. So he won't be able to fight end game characters or monsters right off the bat.
overall great idea, world is portrayed okay, mostly its just a major flaw with the mc, he's the epitome of a person we all hate.
The start is impressive. The flow seemed good and the conversation also paced well. The author did a good job in giving explanations wherever necessary and the writing quality is also good. Keep up the good work author
splendid work just hope for the other to pick it up again. I do understand though if they do not wish to. I do hope that I get to check out more of there work in the future though.
Give this novel a read, the price is right as all 22 chapters are free to read. I am writing this review for my daily reward, yet I am still taking the time to suggest it.
Really good book, I hope everyone does give a shot and this book is soogood...I am not really into this type of book but I like it so far and I also think you guys will like it so do read once...
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Amazing world building concept and very well written, I liked everything about this story and looking forward to more chapters, great work ????
Finally she came back I was going to die because of the important wait It would be annoying if Sophie was against Azurath you'd better be with him and John would be annoying too But out of emotion that someone goes back in time doesn't mean this is a time ramification I mean you have to know when Azurath was imprisoned and explain whether the writer will touch on the multiple crisis with that I think it would be annoying if he brought it in because it would be annoying because there will always be another possibility of going back in time but on the other hand shouldn't Azurath come back too because he has mastered the law of fate and space and maybe time too if he does not mean that he will see them as prophecies for the future that's what we'll see in the chapters Well What's wrong with waiting?