Wow. This is a new tale to be familiar with. What myth did this come from?Writing Quality. Great writing style. Updating Stability. Consistently updated. Story Development. The pace wasn't so fast but it's a bit slow. Character Design. Described along way. The hero is a teenage boy with a big dream but is more pulled by responsibility because of his father's death at an early age. He sounds more mature than his actual age, doesn't he? World Background. Interesting village from old times with men wearing loincloth.I look forward to Mmwana's journey to be the best warrior that he will become. Keep going, author!
Man you have my respect, you are the best webnovel author I've pleasure to follow. Both of your works are fricking amazing. I would gladly support you but because of war I don't have liberty to spend my money as I would like to. Best wishes and keep up the good work.
I'm pretty sure this novel is at least partially inspired by A Hangman's Diary: The Journal of Master Franz Schmidt, Public Executioner of Nuremberg especially the start of the novel though obviously this is a mystical setting and not a real diary of an executioner. It's like a combination of that and a somewhat interesting twist of a sign-in novel except instead of signing in he executes demons to get rewards. Unsure where it will go beyond the executions. Overall, it seems fairly decent. I think it could have been better if instead of a sign in type system he just gave the MC a cultivation technique that relied on slaughter to cultivate and if you get to a certain level you can leave and join a sect or something. That'd be at least a little more interesting than falling victim to some of the same problems that many sign-in novels have such as getting x number of years of cultivation as a reward. Still it is at least a better concept than most sign-in novels at least at this point.
TO BE BLUNT THE AUTHOR IS STEALING FROM HIS READERS. I'll admit this novel is pretty good but if your about to start this novel and updating stability is important to you, I suggest you don't . the author has a bad habit of disappearing a week before the end of the month and then posting like 2 chapters after the privilege has reset, it's happened so many times, i have a hard time believing it's not intentional. Also sometimes he disappears a week after the month starts without any explanation then comes back a few days before the month ends with 2 chapters and a sad story about why he disappeared. I understand that I might sound harsh but he has done this so many times that I'm starting to think that he's just trying to garner sympathy from his readers so they would buy the privilege again next month. Honestly this novel has what it takes to be ranked #1 but the author's deceptive habit is holding it back.
Well, the main character gets cucked, which the author didn’t even bother to warn about, which is quite the annoying thing thung to deal with when you expect a decent novel
Anytime I refresh my Webnovel page, I've been seeing this book and I've always been thinking of meeting the author. I was so happy when I meet the author and he told me to give a review about his book. The novel is interesting. The story development and writing quality is on point. The synopsis caught my eye as well.I want to use this opportunity to thank the author and continue to update more and urge people to read this novel.PS: Will send you a gift soon ??.
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The story is super interesting, but I lost interest when the MC who didn't show any sympathy for other people's problems *suddenly* sympathized with another foreigner...
it's interesting at start. but as i keep reading the Author didn't give lot if information. you just have to figure it out and you'll understand later chapter by using your common sense and the MC is a reincarnated or transmigrator or like but the author lack of giving explanation or information. and the MC is stupid as **** he doesn't like to study he lack knowledge. and the Author just saying the MC could identify easily the beasts but never pointed out if he is just the who can do it. and the the biggest problem here the MC is JUDGE MENTAL. sorry for my grammar. as long as you understand.
Well thought out concept and descriptively tailored world background. The novel is interesting and intriguing with a well maintained uniqueness. Good job author!
10% About Pets.30% about How good the MC is and why people should worship him. 30% about politics / trade. 30% Repeating information or speaking useless information.
?WARNING: This novel is not for people who loves a cold and brute mafia type mc. Our mc here is witty and cool. He can also be ruthless and calculative.? Author's writing quality is refreshing and easy to follow. No grammatical errors here and there. The only concern is the use of punctuations. ?Story development flowed nicely. So far, @ch.70, MC is still more focused on gaming. Personally, I would want to read more wherein the MC engages in mafia related stuffs in real life, we can understand that it's still too early for that and he needs to focus more on gaming to build up his foundation in game.?Regarding character design, well, I really love the MC's personality especially when he does things logically. He's a great MC that thinks practically rather than complicating things.(no fillers so far)Side characters are also well written. They are not overly emphasized but still, one can feel their importance and relevance to the story.?Updating stability? As long as the author does not drop this, I would rate it 5* because so far, I'm really enjoying the story. ?The world background is separated in two ways in general. The world background in-game so far is ever changing because our MC is trying to boost his character's level and status for him to implement his future plans. So far, it's what you would expect from a story with a game genre. On the other hand, his real life world background is what interests me the most. Though not a lot has been given as we are still in the beginning chapters, it's something that we readers should look out for. ?PS: idk why this novel is not at the top 100 yet. even repetitive, unreasonable logic, and grammatically incoherent novels are in top? this novel just lacks exposure. it deserves more. I've been searching for gold and I found gold indeed. Dear Mr. Author, stay safe and healthy. Also, more chapters please? ?