story is going good characters, plot , writing everything is good Still I think writing can be improved a little more which may feel friendly type not some words or lines on screen but with actual soul
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that's all to be reviewed, by reading the other review it's say in the novel MC is an adult but author say is 16 years old, and still act like child well maybe he is a child
"Okay, Carl, you're a smart and good kid, why are you doing this?"
1889 Light residence
'yeah' , weapon thought
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
"Happy Birthday Taehyung-oppa!"
"And of course, His Highness deserves only the best of the best — our beautiful Elizabeth!" The father continues announcing while turning towards me.
I could use a little fuel myself
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb