GrandM3244
Nice premise no swordsman BS but a hunter instead. Completely ruined by the games P2W mechanics that author has ingeniously used to turn an VRMMO into a generic mobile game. MC motivation in gaming is to make money to pay off depts. Within the free chapters he has completed 2 hidden quest and special scenario boss and several material request no one else could fulfill. He has barely made enough money to pay for his expenses in the game. The most basic of things cost absolutely retarded amounts of gold which the only way to properly farm is apparently by buying it with real money. His class most basic abilities are locked behind a slot machine system that requires real money to operate. He has learned no production skills what so ever despite the absolutely retarded cost of arrows/traps/pet food these basic items that his class needs. He has spent 60000+ of dollars just on the stuff his class needs while constantly remarking how he is envious of the rich big shots. He has a cheat that gives him knowledge no one else has access to and yet even with that he has made no progress to even paying of the monthly fees of the dept. Chinese microtransaction gaming culture taken to level where it actually ruins the entire novel. Who cares about the characters? Or the world? Or the story? When every fúcking chapter is MC inserting a credit card just to barely be able to function properly in-game...
"What if you could become the best League of Legends player of all time, overnight? "Cual es la gracia de un personaje que independientemente que tan compleja sea la situación , todo le salga bien.Los defectos son los que construyen al protagonista y si no los tiene el personaje no se siente humano , parece un robot ,un personaje unidimensional.Vamos de las 100k de novelas que tienen que qidian , no pueden encontrar un solo autor que se digne a intentar construir una historia decente ?No hay desarrollo de personajes , literalmente agarra cualquier otra novela de juegos , cámbiale el titulo del juego al del League of Legends y no podrás distinguir las diferencias.
dear author-kunit was a great book over all for the few chapters you had done. it was very interesting and easy to follow I wish that there was more chapters but sadly you dropped the story via cliffhanger-san.I think it would have turned out to be a great book.???☺️?❤️
Well, The story's pretty average but I read too goodies so my remarks are that jumped right into LVL 49 from LVL 1 in a single chapter and didn't explain much about the world or the character and too many grammatical mistakes(even the novel name, not disregarding author's hard work but gotta say the truth)........I endured reading till 30 but no great story, world or character development....SORRY FOR GIVIN AN ASS REVIEW SORRY
