I was expecting MC to become a Celestial King and shenanigans to follow but it's just a powering up fic. What's the point of 1 million years of cultivation if it gets artificially locked? The idle game mechanic isn't even interesting since he got all the rewards (but can't use them all immediately for "some reason").Overall, off to a bad start.
my main discomfort in reading this novel was the improper use of the correct pronouns most of the time(you can tell by context who is be talked about, but it's annoying to read). I also found the mixing up of names annoying.also the constant blunder of referring to the divine PLANE as the divine plan.
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I don't think this is a slice of life, nor do I think it's any kind of power fantasy story. It just feels good to read; it's amusing at times, cats are present, it's very tranquil, and it feels nice to just read about a normal, average existence, especially considering what's going on around the world right now. It feels less like a story and more like a detached view on a completely normal and average world. I love Nocturne already, though what seems to be the FL seems kind of tropish to me. The story is slow, calm and completely normal; there is no conflict, little drive and ambition and makes me feel like I'm just popping into a world to admire the scenery. It's a great story, and I sincerely hope it gets picked up because I think I could use some normalcy in my life right now.
Overall I believe this is a genuinely good novel.The world building is done wonderfully and we come to learn more and more about what we need to know in due time.This brings me to the pacing of the story which is just right in my opinion neither too fast or too slow. The story is progressing well and through the story you'll come to know many sorts of people with their strengths and flows. They each have their way of life which makes them unique on their own. And due to that very reason their actions are very often linked to their vision and or prejudices. They are put in a situation where they are forced to grow in order to survive and through those events subtle change can be seen in the way they deals with whatever comes to them. World building, this novel takes place in a fantasy like Earth in the future following a first apocalypse and a virus that shift humans into monster. Humanity now lives mainly during the day as danger lurk during the night. A new world order is put in place where the population is dispatched into districts that basically are the remaining secure cities out there.Technology has gone through plenty breakthrough and is able to do quite a lot especially with the addition of magic or sorcery.I won't say much about grammar as i myself aren't that good in English but i can at least say that the author wrote the story in a way that makes it easy to understand what is going on. Now as for now i'd like to say first thank you for this enjoyable novel I believe that your work only needs more exposure to soar high. Secondly even if I didn't manage to point out things where you could improve I'm certain there is always a way to improvement and as such your story can only get better from now on if you continue the way you do. Hope this would help some to give some the push to read this work and the author the faith that his efforts hasn't gone unnoticed.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Although this book is very similar to others in the same genre, I am a huge fan and this is unique enough to get me excited for more more chapters. Author-san, keep up the good work!!!
Loving this novel, there are sometimes grammatical errors, but the author checks the comments often and fixes them, as I can speak from experience as I often help correct said errors. This novel is a great read!!! KEEP IT UP AUTHOR
one of the greatest novels if seen, hope you can add more chapters to this great novel??????????????and for the haters that think this novel is bad and I'm wrong you just have no taste in good things.(Explains why you don't have a girlfriend?)