Witchfire & Crown

half the time you cant tell whats going on its so fast pacedwith things occuring but in the same time it drags waiting to see him get evil or see any sort of system

So far it's a good novel about doomsday.Black hearted merchant indeed.

really enjoyed the world background and the development of the characters in this Novel. The way the setting was crafted and the way the characters evolved throughout the story added depth and richness to the overall experience. It made me feel more connected to the world and the people in it, which enhanced my enjoyment of the story. Great job!

Oque eu dizer o LordInsanity já disse, então é só ler o comentário dele. Basicamente todo mundo passa por cima do MC. O único problema da obra pra mim é o MC.

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I stopped reading very recently and I will tell you whyThe story has no purposeNow hold on a minute. Stay with me.Originally the Mc gets sent back in time after a fight with the man who stole his soon to be wife.This creates motivation for the Mc to make money to become rich in order to have the qualifications to marry this girl so much.But what's that 2 busty chicks with 0 character development come around and BAM the Mc has second thoughts about the girl he was in love with.So what comes next... what's the new motivation. What does the Mc strive for. The thing is it's NOTHING. There is no conflict and the Mc is now stupidly overpowered that if their was any conflict even oh I don't know 40,000 players trying to kill you they still wouldn't be able to do it. Now some people say that the last point might be bs because he has the 200,000 back up NPCs and the forbidden scroll but you need to remember that nobody was able to do pretty much anything in smh to him at all coupled with his-S class inheritance allowing him to wield a 2 handed weapon -his battle companion who is hinted at being the GODDESS OF WAR's SISTER [who could easily distory a lvl 150 ETHERAL FEILD BOSS dragon]-his life saving skills such as making himself go into another dimension -oh and not to mention if that all fails he can just teleport his party in who will have 2 more S class inheritance         -on this the Mc says that it was rare for a REIGION to have one of these in his past life yet now on his team his 2 herem girls whos personalities are at best considered stereotypes-don't forget one of his other party members will now get himself a dragon -coupled with the fact that he can summon a pet meaning he to will probably get a dragon cause why not-he is a tank with the strength of a DPS class. This might not seem like much but it makes the Mc so stupidly overpowered the fact that no one can kill him. - he can do dmg to people almost 1 shoting them while they are powerless to do a damn thing to stop him even professionals , just look I  the recent chapters of the teams from India and Europe,  powerless, NOTHING they can doSo what's his motivation. What's his goal now. He is the most overpowered person in the game. And frankly NOTHING goes wrong and he winds up getting everything he needs automatically       -example the first main story quest              -the unicorn horn              -the black dragon heart        - why? Cause why notThere really is no point in reading it unless your looking forward to the chapters  where there is a world war but with his guild having 3 S class inheritance when just 1 can turn the tide in a battle there really is no point in reading the bookIf you feel as though I mis-categorized something please point it out so I can clarify. I will not insult you  as everyone has their own opinions End of my rant Have a nice day