WHEN I CANT SEE! ( VERS ENG)

My goodness! Great work, thor! The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. Really anticipate the next chapter of this story. Keep up on a good work!

This novel is so cool! Highly recommended for someone who likes mystery genre. Okay, waiting for the next part, Sis!

First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.

I can say that the novel draw my interest. The novel was typical Indonesia's romance story but the plot to uncover mystery of MC's wife is something unique. It make me curious and teased me to continue reading the next chapter. I can't wait to know the end.

The novel have a few grammar errors and hard to digest paragraph but I'm sure, it will improved as the chapters keep growing. Lastly, keep the spirit up, Ayu_Kristin. We, the readers, cheers for you.

The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. extraordinary stories. and also interesting to follow. I wonder how Nico's life after he went blind. Oh Nico you so pitty. How pitty a handsome mand like him become blind. oh ....[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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