Welcome To Terminus

I'm not done reading the entire chapters but I must say I love your choice of words.
The saying '18-year-old child and 9-year-old adult' is so comical.
The characters are built up very well that we got to see their addictions in the first chapter.
Nice book author.

Give this one a chance! If you can overlook the grammatical and spelling errors, there's a fast paced, action packed storyline here and the character design is incredible! I fell in love with the characters by the end of the first chapter. Keep up the good work author!

Reviewed up to chapter 8.

The writing quality is on the rough side. The POV switches mid-scene - however, this does seem to be a trend on Webnovel in general -, the pros don't quite flow, and there are grammar errors peppered throughout. However, the writing quality improves dramatically after the first two chapters.

The story is paced well.  While fast, it allows time to set up the relationship between the main characters, their situation, and their initial goals before getting thrown into the plot.

While the character descriptions are in "blocks" the characters themselves have personalities. Beyond some of the dialogue being on the janky side, the characters have unique voices.  And I do appreciate the relationship between the leads. It's obvious they care about each other.

The world has some unique qualities to it. It's obvious that the writer is well versed in a range of anime and pop culture, and that shows in the world-building. :)

Interesting concept. the charachters are interesting to read about, waiting to see what happens to them. The suspense, really cool. Nice work.

So off the bat, the highligt of this story is trully the characters. They have a lot of personality and a very amusing dynamic! They complement each other perfectly.
Now the writting quality could use a bit of work, nothing that completely cripples the story as a whole, but enough to stagger at times to understand what exactly is going on.

Overall, an excellent story! I hope you keep going and make it even better!

The concept of the story is cool and the exaggerations of the characters make it hilarious to watch. I totally love the funny dialogues and the way they are put.
It is weird and yet nice to be in a game. I could visualise the apocalypse and all the things described in the book.
I only wish that I hadn't felt overwhelmed by the sudden physical descriptions of the characters. Otherwise, the story is going great and has wonderful ideas to make it seem like the next Hunger Games.
I wish you good luck, Author!