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Amazing! <3                                          The story plot is superb.I really loved your writing style.                                           Can't wait to read more of it! ?

I like the premise so far, and it’s obvious that the author has thought a lot about the world and characters and has planned it out really well. My only critique is that there are a lot of sentences without periods and mission capitalization. It’s still a pretty good story though :)

After reading 20 chapters of your story~First chapters are big headache. Your style is something hard for me. I don't talk about grammar or something...Later - story is really better to read. But still something tickles me. But hey! Idea is very good and I wish you the best! This is something fresh for sure. Just without first chapters.

so bad, translation is trash, powerlevel trash everything is trash........................................................................

Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................