In my opinion, if the translation and updates section were removed, this story would only get a 3.0 rating.Why?Well, for starters, although the world background looks well thought out, it isn't that great, in my opinion - at least at the beginning, since we don't know much about the wider scope. All we know is the sect - I mean, come on, at least tell us what's beyond the sect and it's scope of influence at the beginning, so we know what we're dealing with and how much to sympathize with the travel and influence systems of the MC's world.Next, let's take a look at character design. All I have to say for this is that there's nothing riveting about the character design. Also, I have a hundred different impressions of the MC because of this storytelling.Speaking of which, the storytelling. I have to say, the plot idea of the author was amazing, but his storytelling was not quite up to mark. He seems to be trying to speed up and breeze through everything, but if you're gonna explain, try and explain everything.Also, if you read my books and think I'm a hypocrite, you're free to think so - it's because I contracted Author's Disease - the disease where suddenly every book other than yours is more interesting to you, so you read them and don't write yours.
