you're ginger, american AND a woman? triple homicide huh?
tommyinnit x oc
_if Tommy or anyone in the story is uncomfortable with this lmk and I'll take it down asap:]
⚠️Spoilers⚠️:Two chapters in and there is already a massive plot hole. See, Merlin was one of the strongest figures in their world's history and his class was also the same as the MC's; an SSS-Class - Reader. But somehow, the very same teacher who used to brag about Merlin's achievements didn't recognize the MC's class even when Merlin's autobiography was available at the library. There is also the problem of the slightly less powerful, ice cold, and focused heroine. The side characters are two dimensional and didn't have proper development and they were used as items to drive the plot. In terms of the grammar, I didn't notice any big error but it was still a bit of a struggle to not focus on the minor errors.
Starts off very promising and very good and then degenerates into complete illogic with MC playing passive observer and just going along and not questioning anything and even agreeing with those who try to kill him! Really disappointing especially after it started SO well.MC also turns from guy who saved another life into guy who doesn't care if attempted murder is made on him since its 'school policy' and he is fine with it.
Ishida was surprised. Akihito's skills were actually very good despite experiencing everything for the first time. As per Asami's instructions, the photographer employed to follow Akihito to capture candid shots for Asami's private collection busied away. It was funny how the fated mates thought alike. Ishida was told by Akihito to keep his camera nearby the whole trip and help him distract Asami whenever he could so that the photographer could take secret shots of his beautiful husband.
