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Once that was done it was time to work on the difficult part. The level of intricacy needed for his desired long range armament would require an extreme level of concentration even with the A.I. enhancing his ability to control the nanites. He couldn't even wait until they stopped for the night either, since he would ultimately run out of power before he accomplished much of anything. The first and hardest thing he had to do was produce the batteries he would need, and He was forced to rely on Steve to guide him around the trees while he worked due to their complexity. Since he lacked access to more exotic materials, he was forced to use a more experimental type of battery than he would have preferred.
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Seeing the enemies were still made of stone I summoned a sledge and charged it full of mana And launched it straight at the closest statue.
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Kaso naisip ko na hindi din magiging maganda ang journey to your real love.
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"I think," he pulled back a little. "I think you are wrong. I have something to trade. To trade for your allegiance. You will finally see a reason to embrace the dark side and cast aside the foolish trappings of... love!" he spat out as if cursing God.
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She could say it but sadly breaking up with him, she couldn't do it. She wondered if it was a female gender that made her like this. Guys could always break up with her in a blink of a eye, that's why she stopped dating millionaires and dated someone who'd actually need her but now she's the one who needs him and she's still the one being played.
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You'll never shine if you don't glow
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While it doesn’t bring much new to the equation of saving the villainess otome isekai otome game more than makes up for it in some of the best excecution I’ve seen in some time. Characters: The protagonist and love interest are likeable and have great chemistry, the antagonist is deliciously hatable but not too the degree where it effects the readers suspension of disbelief, (as a side people like that exist I have met them), side characters aren’t neglected at all and have enough spotlight placed on them that they are memorable but not so much that they steal the spotlight from the main cast.Pacing: it retains a good forward momentum so that you feel like something worth reading has happened but doesn’t feel rushed. Plot points don’t feel needlessly dragged out and every word feels as if it serves a purpose rather than being there to increase word count.Settings: the setting is a typical magic school otome setting nothing really of note here but the story is character driven so that doesn’t retract from the quality overall.Release rate: a good stable one chapter per week with consistent quality, minimal typos, and moderate length.Writing Quality: Great, it’s clearly been properly proofread, the author clearly cares about this story and i haven’t run into any instances where I had to read a section more than once to figure out what’s going on. PS: to the author, originality is overrated, execution is far more important so don’t take my comment on “not bringing anything new to the equation” as a negative point.
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I love the story and the fact that it is free readingg?Pls keep updating
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I like how it is paced and the mc of this novel?
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This book is amazing, and I've just read 4 chapters. I can't wait to see who Odetta's gonna end up with ❤️❤️❤️❤️ I love her character.I love the novel. It's perfect, I'm tired of reading submissive girl, poor girl love story all the time

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