The pacing in this batch is genuinely impressive. You start with Cheng Youyou by the river, getting soaked by a boar, dealing with Zi Wu's ego trip, then she's butchering meat, marinating it, heading out to gather supplies, running into Ji Xuan, going to the granary, and coming back — all in one continuous flow. There's no dragging. No filler. Every scene pushes the story forward.
What I love is how the author uses Cheng Youyou's internal monologue as a pacing device. When she's processing the boar situation, you get her rapid-fire thoughts — the curse she swallows, the calculation about Zi Wu's strength, the realization that she needs to dissolve these contracts. It keeps the energy high even during quieter moments. And then the Ji Xuan encounter? It starts with her deliberately avoiding him, then he just appears behind her and suddenly the tension shifts. She's on edge the whole time, wondering what his angle is, and the reader is right there with her.
The chapter transitions are also clean. Chapter 27 ends with her gathering materials, Chapter 28 drops her into the granary with Ji Xuan, and Chapter 29 circles back to the cave. There's a nice symmetry to it — she leaves her cave, interacts with the world, returns changed. The only thing I'd want more of is maybe a slightly longer breather between the Zi Wu scene and the Ji Xuan encounter, but honestly, the momentum works in its favor. I wanted to keep reading.