THE TYRANT'S CUNNING PET

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Very interesting story with a repetive cycle of getting hired, doing well, pissing someone off and getting fired which gets boring to the core. Also a lot of offending are just senseless just for the face smacking at the end. If I have a talented employee I do not need to antagonize him for no reason.

Why in the world would you lock below chapter 20, much less chapter 5. locking chapter 4 and above is foolish, and a huge waste of my time to continue reading during a trial read.  This is quite frustrating too, as while I have enjoyed the first 3 chapters this is nowhere near enough unlocked content to willingly continue reading.

Comparisonmost of novel : - low quality enemy (arogant young master, sidedish, filler enemy)- Single galaxy ( even with multi plane, it same single galaxy, single zone )- op dragon phoenix or other godly beast bloodline- single point of view- op system- mc become god and donethis novel :- high quality enemy, it doesnt come out of nowhere,  there reason and multi chain of reason, you got one enemy, there more enemy behind. - multi galaxy, multi race story, even ant can standalone story- multi cultivation power- multi point of view- super nerfed system, it not omnipotent here- super chain of event, this made story interesting that u curious who, why this happened - mc become god, it not done yet, it just end of mc arch in his galaxy, but start of mc venture to other galaxy to solve multy galaxy problemthat comparison between this novel vs other. yes this novel rough at start but nice in middle to end. start mc only use his muscle and his crapmouth, but later he use his brain, friend power and no crapmouth, yeah because you need other to solve galaxy problem. no romantic here but mc explain why he didnt need romantic for now.

The writing quality of the story is probaly the main thing giving it a lower score. It is understandable as in guessing it isnt the authors first language, and it is one of his first works which will result in him not knowing a much descriptive words etc.If the author needs it i can proofread his chapters and rewrite certain paragraphs where i need to. I dont have much experience execpt for about 40 chapters of My vampire system (first 40-50 chaps). Just respond to this review with your discord (Username or server code) or something along those lines where i can give you an example of a paragraph i would rewrite.

This is a really great novel. I have always liked a more dark cultivation story and this novel does that really well. I like the power stages and all the technique’s involved, they are not over complicated but still feel in depth and interesting. the story has more elements than just cultivating and killing and they all work well together. Give it a fair chance and you will like it.