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THE TRAP : A JOURNEY TOWARDS LIGHT

THE TRAP : A JOURNEY TOWARDS LIGHT
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Abuse Arrangedmarriage Baba Bhaiya Brotherhood Childabuse Collagelife Fatherson Friends Hospital India Mafia Mentalhealth Motherson Teenfiction Trauma Violence
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  • Author:
  • Amaya
  • Status:Ongoing

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" How was your 3 days adventure my little prince" the man said in a heart chilling tone...... " I...I....a...am.....s...sorry..." The kid stammered due to fear..... ________________________________________ " Nahi....nahi!!.... mujhe jaane dijiye yaha se!!!......chodo mujhe!!!!....chodo please!!!!" The kid shouted while struggling in their hold helplessly......he was getting uncontrollable and was about to get a panic attack any moment.... ____________________________________ " Do you think you can run away from me little one......" The man's dark tone made the boy halt in his track......he turned and looked at the man fearfully....... __________________________________________ It's gonna be a short story..... It is the story of a 16 year old boy Reyansh, who is too innocent and kind-hearted for the outside world, his mother tried her level best to protect her kid but her one mistake never let them live in peace........she married a devil before, whom the world bows down.... She ran away from him in hope to protect her child from that hell....but to her bad luck they ended in something even worst....... The innocent kid has witnessed the most horrible things throughout his childhood........all he prayed was to end his traumatic life soon.... But one day a blessing in disguise knocked their doors..... ⚠️Read the story to know further......

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Rating(3.4 / 5.0, 21votes)
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Brandon_Downtain's avatar
March 31,2025
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This story could be good, if you could read it! English is terrible, editing would be wonderful if it were done!!!!!
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KuruptsA4i's avatar
April 8,2025
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its an Interesting premise, really cool world, filled with Interesting characters. I would say bottom line read it, but the lack of updates, slow story progression after a certain number of chapters and now months of nothing at all, idk. you should put it in your library and if you see updates at some piont start reading. really want to see we're this thing goes.
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DaoistYellowBird's avatar
April 8,2025
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The story is about the personal and gaming life of the esports players or the pro gamers.The portrayal of the story (in my opinion) is very realistic, especially how characters are being treated by the fans, either being respected or hated . It has its own charm that makes me want to read it more. The MC is not that SUPER OP MC like in other novel, at first his average sometimes admirable, but in the later chapters.... I can only say one word....Not OP.... but SHAMELESS...yes SHAMELESS...HE IS THE SHAMELESS BATTLE GOD.
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DystopicWorld's avatar
August 21,2023
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Definitely a new thought ?I see cultured content, I give 5?It's good to see change from all that demons or monsters or pets...looks like a slice of life but still a mystery..?Looking forward to reading it ☺️
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ForniciaYadrea's avatar
April 10,2025
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Nice novel ?. An extremely powerful story of a young Southern Negro, from his late high school days through three years of college to his life in Harlem.His early training prepared him for a life of humility before white men, but through injustices- large and small, he came to realize that he was an "invisible man". People saw in him only a reflection of their preconceived ideas of what he was, denied his individuality, and ultimately did not see him at all.
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DeathWalker's avatar
August 21,2023
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Very nice so far. Haven't seen any errors in your writing style and your word choices are quite intriguing, to say the least. Synopsis: Tbh, this is the only part of the book that I didn't truly like. I do find it appealing whenever authors include a section of the story within the synopsis which you did quite well. However, you never really mentioned what the story was about which is why I didn't give the full 5 stars. All I got from the synopsis was a little insight into the characters' personalities and that it seemed to be a cultivation novel. Would be good if you added a bit more information on the entire setting of the story.Writing Quality: You could normally consider me part of the grammar police. However, there were no mistakes that I saw within your grammar or writing. It was all perfect unless I overlooked something which I hope I didn't. Great Job!Story Development: Pacing is a little slow at the start but that's fine. Keep doing what you're doing.Character Design: Not much said here. You barely described the characters unless I overlooked something. You only used broad terms like "Beautiful" etc. But that's perfectly fine as it is a matter of preference. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look instead of having them described by the author.Overall, a great job so far. The book has potential and I wish you all the best author!
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