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The idea of the story seems alright but the author assumes too much like we are suppose to know all this info that the character somehow knows already like 2Seconds his in his world next his In another and boom he knows all the cultivation ranks Without any knowLedge of thAt World? Like what? If this is how it start maybe it will keep happening or the author will decide to make the mc a retard like all those other am a “noob” cultivator but am aCtually a big shot type of novel.

The MC forms a team and the first member of that team is, in the words of the author "a legal loli" and it's creepy af. the author constantly sexualised the person who "looks like a 12 year old girl" and it's weird af

Just the title of the book got me all excited! I really adore the separate pov's. The characters are so strong and influencing. Keep up the good work!!

It is the story of an average person getting a portal to the technological world, up to the 17th chapter, there is no young master, no scheming, just a boy starting his business with robots. Update of one chapter is very slow. I need at least 10 chapters a day. Need more, update fast. Grammar and connotation are slightly misplaced but the overall story and character development are good. There isn't much to think about, the story is straightforward and enjoyable to read.

"Hanya karena suka?"

"I know." Li Qiye calmly and slowly enunciated his words without fear: "However, the person who carries the order has the right to demand any request — this was the rule established by Immortal Emperor Min Ren."