The Primordial Dragon Artificer System That Can Manifest A Body!

This story plot legit gave a stomachache.The guy doesn't even know the concept of low-key, he had to seize every chance to show off like a needy kid for attention , the most stupid thing is that he keeps lying and spitting nonsense without considering the consequences if he was found out ,yet everybody believes it like its normal without even trying to find out if its the truth. Even children books arent this naive .Fk ruined my day again.

The character is annoying but that's also for character development so the beginning is annoying but understandable. But it's also realistic which I like and can respect because lets be honest how many stories truly can come off as even a little realistic on webnovel.   But the development is a little too fast which I'm not the biggest fan of.

this story/novel is interesting and has a lot of potential..I myself am facinated with the idea of modern weapons vs cultivation bullshit but the reason  why writing quality is 2 star is because of so many grammatical errors(which can improve)I can understand that maybe this is your first book and English is not your second language but the amount of grammatical errors here are so many...Overall it's a great read you just gotta improve your grammar...

????⬜⬜????     ?Please don't drop the novel. now I'm going to put words to eat lines if not I won't be able to post this. have a nice day ?

The accusing cries of the crowd around her started to become unbearable but it was drowned out by her inner thoughts that were far louder inside her head.

Shin: "Oh and how much stronger have you become?"