The Price of Love Was Only Despair and Hell

A story worth reading and seeing the ride. Itd be nice to have this translated.Hey at least this story stays consistent, a lot of novels with higher writing quality but disorganized and messy stories

Very promising story, a lot of potential.The setting and characters are introduced fast and effectively, the characters and plot evolve naturally although some parts seem a bit fast or flipped through.Definitely a good read if you like anti-heroes and the super-hero genre.

I really like this story I had read it before but the quality wasn't as good as this one.  It was understandable and there were some words that I couldn't understand but it was fine it didn't bother me.

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I just binged this and I really liked it. Its a very unique story with the protagonist being beat down over and over again with no holds barred, many times to her own fault. The overarching plot is well written with the unravelling of the memory loss and the whole Rakon deal, making her remember experiences while killing off everyone relevant to it. Really sold me on the downward mental spiral. Here are some thoughts:There were two timeskips, both understandable, but quite sudden. I feel like you could've eased out of them with some development. For example, after the first time-skip you could've had a scene giving insight on Lillian's love-hate relationship with Kalika, or after the second time-skip made it so Rhonda was overly affectionate to the point where it was clear she was hiding something. Often times I felt that some scenes were too sudden and after something happens, the impact on Kalika is rushed. e.g. Rakon and her... yeah. She spent like 2 seconds mulling over it and it didn't seem to contribute to her demonization much. Feel like she should be hating Rakon a LOT more than just "I wanna kill all the demons including Rakon

The girl without any second thought blocked the attack by using her own body as a shield. She didn't have much time to cast a spell for barrier.