The Lifegivers

The strength of this story is its good characterization. When the potato chip girl appeared, I didn't expect it to be so well written. I thought she would just be an insignificant supporting role.
The writer is very good at making good characterizations with minimal background characters.

Hi, the author here, shamelessly gives five stars on his own work .... Honestly, I'm actually ashamed to do this, but even successful Webnovel writers have done so. So, I thought there was nothing wrong with doing what they did.


Originally, I was going to fill this review with a magnificent, delightful, glorious, spectacular, and delicious comedy, but I'm afraid it won't comply with Webnovel's policy. It could be mistaken for a dummy review.

Hence, I chose to give a few very important pieces of information about this novel:

- The protagonist is single.
- The protagonist's father is technically unemployed.
- The protagonist's neighbor sells chicken noodles.

Oops .... Looks like I gave you too much. It's not fun if your enjoyment of reading slumps because you get too much information, right?

So, read on and enjoy this insanity.

This novel is one of the worst novels i have ever read...

MC of this novel is annoying sentimental idiot with Hero syndrome....
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I only got to chapter 10 since I thought it would get better. Some Mc's do dumb stuff but this MC just has a general disconnect with intelligence. Honestly this idiot and his father should be placed in a government lab. Their lack of intelligence makes them a danger to themselves.

I followed your previous work which was written in Indonesian. Maybe the way of writing is different because of the English language. However, the storyline is still interesting and the pace is better than the previous work. Keep the spirit.

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