The Last Thunderborn

It’s getting interesting and can’t wait for more ...️

I really like this novel! I got hooked since the beginning, and I was so disappointed when the chapters began to become locked, lol. But, I would gladly unlock the chapters because this is such an amazing novel!

Even though the story seems interesting, the grammar my boy.. Is just horrible. I tried multiple times but i couldn't move past it. Before dropping 500+ chapters you could have edited your first chapters. Bs.

Hello author.. when will you release the other chapters. we're looking forward to it and I'm so eager to read it? and please make it perfect smarter, powerful and stronger of our MC. Hope he is one of a kind and so loyal to his partner/lover, pls don't disappoint us. hehe thanks ?and i hope you can notice me senpai ?

esta entretenido el libro, pero no explican mucho del mundo donde se encuentran, también nos dicen el nivel de cultivo que tiene pero pasan por alto como un obviedad saber si muestra su cultivo completo o en que nivel lo muestra, tampoco menciona mucho el trasfondo de los personajes, por ejemplo se menciona varias sectas y cultos pero nada mas

First off, despite the rating this is not by any means a bad story, it has issues but it has qualities of redemption.Firstly the writing quality, I understand English is not everyone's first language but this book screams machine translation. Poor grammar, misspelt words that sound the same vocally abound. Quite frankly I got through half the released chapters (37 actual, 4 Q & As) and was gonna drop it on how badly the engrish became. Honestly author including the abbreviations and the full word in several places shows a distinct lack of proof reading.Story Development, decent if rushed. Typical zombie apocalypse yet there is literally tons of unanswered questions on how John spreads the virus worldwide from one hick town.Character Design, I literally dislike everyone. John, Dixie, Alexia, Alice, James, Candice... all prime characters who lack any relatable or endearing quality. John starts off as a tragic hero MC but soon goes full angst evil bitch.Updating Stability, from what I've seen updates happen, my biggest issue is wasting chapters on question and answer sections, seriously webnovel books have a specific chapter setting for this sort of thing that does not require breaking up the story or having 41 chapters but the latest title being chapter 37. LEARN TO USE THE SITE AUTHORWorld Background... nothing is explained. Yes its the world we live in but everything is just FBI this, police that. The zombie general attacks the white house which seems to lack any defenses just so the author can massacre president "Grump". Alot is glossed over to force plot.In closing, the book isn't bad. The premise starts off great... its just i feel someone coated the sled bottom in no stick spray before rushing down the hill, the speed is going at break neck pace with no ability to enjoy the ride. When it stops it won't be to a kid laughing in wild fun, it'll be to tears on a good premise rushed and squandered.